by Mitera Nikkou » Sun Feb 13, 2005 10:46 pm
Well, for several reasons, I left some information out, leaing them more as suggestions. For instance, when I said the girl wasn't mentally prepared, I was hoping that that was taken to mean that she hadn't become pregnant at all. I mean, if you're not ready, you don't stop using protection, right? *Ehem* The other, is that I didn't mention there being any sex leading to the pregnancy: because I was focusing on the character's current thoughts, and wanted it to be clear that she was considering staying a girl somehow so as to not become awkward with them as a guy in order to remain with her friends, and not because of sex (like in those stories, you know?).
So, yeah... And the guy had to go along with the whole process or else he'd never be changed back. But the pregnancy and having to pretend to like the girl's husband aside, he wanted to keep the good part of the whole ordeal. So, while he'd rather not remain as the girl he was swapped with (what with having a husband he didn't like, and the responsibility of a child he didn't want at that time (never know, maybe he'd change his mind one day)), he wouldn't mind becoming another girl to maintain the friendships he had.
While all that's not readily seen in the caption, it can be, and hinted to a degree. I did the best I could, but I felt expressing the now-mother's thoughts at that time to be more important. And I couldn't seem to add all of that extra information without making it confusing, because I wanted to approach it from her take on things at the moment in the picture. ^_^; *Wacks her bad captioneering brain*
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned because only women can give two tits for every tat.
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