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Postby Erick Guardian » Wed Feb 23, 2005 3:39 pm

I fgured, why the hell not. Might as well work on a few things in between ducking and dodging homework assignments. Here's my first caption attempt in a while. I do have another on the main site. (5 bucks to the person who can guess which one it is.)

http://stu.aii.edu/~err151/Stone.jpg

Feel free to shread it if you want. I'm somewhat out of practice on these things. So any C&C is much appreicated.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Wed Feb 23, 2005 4:41 pm

A few grammatical errors aside, you did good. But I'm wondering... Did the green stone become a necklace after he messed with it, or was it a necklace and he wore it? My curiosity gives me the urge to find out. @.@
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Postby Erick Guardian » Wed Feb 23, 2005 4:46 pm

It was a necklace and he wore it. Probably should have made that more clear in the caption.

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Postby Kumi-chan » Wed Feb 23, 2005 7:14 pm

Well, I thought as much. I love it. *giggles* Great fun! Actually I think about finding an item like that in RL that could TG when I wear it but when I take it off I would change back. But that's a great caption.
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Postby Beyond » Wed Feb 23, 2005 8:31 pm

interesting caption, but did he fell the urge to put it? why did he just put it?
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Postby Duck » Thu Mar 17, 2005 3:50 am

I liked it. But the only thing I think it can really use is just a bit more detail. Or a little more history on the stone.
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Postby Erick Guardian » Thu Jun 16, 2005 1:06 am

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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:28 am

Oh, wow, I liked these alot. It's hard to choose a particular one that's better than the other. @_@ And just a misspelling or two.
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Postby Christina Anikari » Thu Jun 16, 2005 8:59 am

Yeah they were good. I think i now know what vampire clan i would be embraced by if i was going to get embraced, though i don't plan on being embraced i like food and sunlight to much for that.
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Postby Sasha » Thu Jun 16, 2005 10:26 am

I like the EternalSeminar one lol. You just have to give em more ideas XD
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Postby Kumi-chan » Thu Jun 16, 2005 12:42 pm

Very nice work Erick. They are wonderful.
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Postby Becca » Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:24 pm

I love the use of Vogon's!

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Postby Duck » Thu Jun 16, 2005 4:24 pm

gotta love the Vogon one.

As a fan of the books and movie.. it was just plain nifty.
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Postby opus` » Thu Jun 16, 2005 6:53 pm

Hehe...love the last two. Good job!
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