I've always liked succubi. The idea of women who prevail over men by taking advantage of their base instincts, followed by the capture of their soul... Very intimate, kinky, and clever.
I like Hiro's stuff, it's original and the plot doesn't seem far off from the picture itself. It's very playful. The only complaint I have is that he needs a greater contrast between the text and background's colors because a couple are hard to read.