by Mitera Nikkou » Sun Jul 10, 2005 5:36 pm
Controversial? I don't see why... And I thought it was generally good, but the way you wrote it kind of lost some of the effect for me. Or, it's probably just me and my attention span not being able to grasp it all in one read. >.< *Whaps self* However, even if rushing in the end, that was the part where I best understood it, and helped me see the whole more clearly in reflection.
Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned because only women can give two tits for every tat.
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