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MisplacedIdea wrote:I gotta say, Lucky, while I'm thinking about it. You do good series work. More of those would be great to see in the next batch.
Terri Violet Tsukino wrote:I thought the biker one was really well written and touching.^_^
I really liked the first demoness cap and the two "Demoness Hunger" ones. Despite the site's limit on how explicit content can get and your own dislike of such content, you did really well instilling a subtle sense of sensuality in those caps...mostly through emotion than through physicality I might add.Though, speaking of physicality, you managed to describe the body and outfit changes in the original cap pretty well...it was descriptive, but didn't feel overlong or forced. I liked the implication that the boy might eventually enjoy having the demoness use him as a vessel, even though he was currently horrified of what happened.
I thought the "Demoness Hunger" demonesses played off each other well...the large chested one came across as confident and helpful, while the small-chested one's ravenousness came through quite nicely in her dialouge. I was wondering, though, in the "Hunger" caps, were the demonesses just using the boys as their bodies, with the boys retaining their old personalities as the invading spirits just kind of drove them around or did the demonesses somehow merge with the boys, creating new personalities with the memories of both the boys and the demonesses?
I hope that question made sense.^^;; Despite not fully understanding your intentions with those two caps, I was impressed and inspired by them.^^
Rowan wrote:They say that brevity is the key to good communication.
I'll leave the holes for the reader to fill in, makes them think more ya know? Posstion, Fusstion, or modified with the same base personality. It's up to you to decide.
^^
Lucky wrote:Glade every one enjoyed my last ones. Here's a new batch.
^^
Stupid Cranky wizard!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... d_pool.jpg
Looks like the other wizards have been getting the same ideas.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... izard2.jpg
FLYING RICE CAKES OF DOOM.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... s/Rice.jpg
Classic bad boys to good girls. X___x Never did one before, so I figured I'll try my hand at it.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... _class.jpg
Some people don't take break-ups very well. (Warning: Graby-Ness)
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... friend.jpg
And the more you know!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... /lab-1.jpg
You got to feel sorry for them.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... /woods.jpg
Evil person and there magic!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... r_maid.jpg
And a even more evil book!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... /Novle.jpg
Rocks as hard as Freebird on expert with a 99% hit rate!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... k_band.jpg
He's such a angle
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... _angle.jpg
The return of the great.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... roress.jpg
If I was randomly turned into a girl, I would proply look alot like her. O___o We both got about the same colour hait and eyes, I were glasses (Only when I need to though), and we're both plae as can be. The 360 controllers just make it more creepy.
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... ns/bet.jpg
Ghosties and nature!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... osts01.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... osts02.jpg
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... osts03.jpg
SWIM SUIT NINJA!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... a_suit.jpg
BATTLE TO THE ALMOST DEATH!
http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a86/Da ... _death.jpg
Katty wrote:Wow. Someone has been busy. They are all good captions, but I did see a few spelling errors in some of them. Just make sure to re-read your captions from now on to see if you can fix them before hand.
Other wise then that, I liked um. I liked the Kitty pool one the best, but that is kinda a duh by now, huh? =^-^=
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