Jumping on the captioning bandwagon
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:27 pmMagical Sailor Fuku
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Jumping on the captioning bandwagon
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 12:27 pm
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 2:15 pmWell done!
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 2:18 pmEnjoyable =)
Re:Jumping on the caption bandwagon
Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:06 pmThank you so much! 
I'm glad my first shot at this was well-recieved.^^ I hope to whip some more soon.
I'm glad my first shot at this was well-recieved.^^ I hope to whip some more soon.Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2007 6:09 pmIt seems that you are off to a nice start. Don't want to wait for more, but I will if i have to. =^-^=
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 12:08 pmHee hee, thanks Katty.^^
Two more!
Careful...That walk in the forest may change your life forever...
He is ninja, she is ninja too...
Two more!
Careful...That walk in the forest may change your life forever...
He is ninja, she is ninja too...
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 12:09 pmOops, that was me, forgot to log in.^^;;
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:56 pmI think your captions are solid. The ideas behind two out of three of them aren't of personal interest to me, but that's no fault of yours.
The one about the forest is nice, though with some tweaking the rhyming could be more smooth. But it's mostly the last verse that I find the most off-balance.
The one about the forest is nice, though with some tweaking the rhyming could be more smooth. But it's mostly the last verse that I find the most off-balance.
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 3:28 pmNot so fond of the ninja one. Well written, but it's an idea I don't like personally...TF Rape is bad.
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 4:53 pmThe little poemlet one was cute. 
And I gotta concur, the harem notion was on the creepy side. Granted, if that's what you were going for, you succeeded. Not everything is sunshine and light, after all. It's still creepy, though.
And I gotta concur, the harem notion was on the creepy side. Granted, if that's what you were going for, you succeeded. Not everything is sunshine and light, after all. It's still creepy, though.Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 6:14 pmYeah. The poem might have flown a bit better, but I just can't put my finger on why. As for the ninja one, I too am not a big fan of that TG idea. But hey, If that is what you wanted, then good job on it. It was a well writen caption. =^-^=
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 7:12 pmI enjoyed your two newest captions.
=)
I think of it more along the lines of thows old "love potion" stories. It just so happens the love potion turns man into a women who's madly in love.
=U
=)
Chibi MitchellTF wrote:Not so fond of the ninja one. Well written, but it's an idea I don't like personally...TF Rape is bad.
I think of it more along the lines of thows old "love potion" stories. It just so happens the love potion turns man into a women who's madly in love.
=U
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:11 pmLucky wrote:I enjoyed your two newest captions.
=)Chibi MitchellTF wrote:Not so fond of the ninja one. Well written, but it's an idea I don't like personally...TF Rape is bad.
I think of it more along the lines of thows old "love potion" stories. It just so happens the love potion turns man into a women who's madly in love.
=U
Did I mention I'm not too fond of Love Potions either?
Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2007 8:31 pmChibi MitchellTF wrote:Lucky wrote:I enjoyed your two newest captions.
=)Chibi MitchellTF wrote:Not so fond of the ninja one. Well written, but it's an idea I don't like personally...TF Rape is bad.
I think of it more along the lines of thows old "love potion" stories. It just so happens the love potion turns man into a women who's madly in love.
=U
Did I mention I'm not too fond of Love Potions either?
To each there own.
=)
Posted: Fri Apr 13, 2007 9:35 pmTo Nikkou: I've long been impressed with the quality of your captions, so if you say my captions are solid, I must be doing something right.^^
I'm guessing that when you meant that two of them didn't interest you, you meant the mental control aspect...unless I'm somehow way off.XD But that's okay, people have different preferences.^^
To Guendolen: I'm glad you thought the poemlet was cute. Kinda wierd in a way how that pair of captions turned out, one short and cute, one long and creepy.^^;; It's okay, it's understandable that you'd find that one creepy.^_^ I'll explain more of my intentions behind it in a bit.
To Lucky: Glad I made you happy.^^ I almost get the impression that you wouldn't mind a sip of love potion, lol.
Thanks for all the feed back, both the praise and criticism, guys.^^ It helped a lot.^_^
To tell the truth, I basically winged the poemlet. Just wrote it down with a vague idea of what sounded "poemy." I'm glad it turned out as well as it did, but it probably would sound better with some tweaking of the syllables, mainly the last one, as Nikkou said.^^
In regards to the ninja one...I was going for "playfully dark" rather than "despairingly dark..." though I may not have entirely succeded in that.^^;; I think that maybe I should have made it more clear that the transformee was happy in the end, and developed the person who transformed her in such a way that he had some sort of redeeming quality. But then again, it may not have made much difference, as one could argue that just because someone is happy after being mind altered, it doesn't mean it's not scary that they've been mind altered in the first place.^^;; And that's a perfectly understandable view.^^ I think the next time I try a mental alteration cap, I'll try to make it more focused on cuteness than sexuality, and try to make both the victim and the culprit more sympathetic, in an experiment to see if I can entertain a wider range of people, and develop my writing style.
I'm guessing that when you meant that two of them didn't interest you, you meant the mental control aspect...unless I'm somehow way off.XD But that's okay, people have different preferences.^^
To Guendolen: I'm glad you thought the poemlet was cute.
Kinda wierd in a way how that pair of captions turned out, one short and cute, one long and creepy.^^;; It's okay, it's understandable that you'd find that one creepy.^_^ I'll explain more of my intentions behind it in a bit.
To Lucky: Glad I made you happy.^^ I almost get the impression that you wouldn't mind a sip of love potion, lol.
Thanks for all the feed back, both the praise and criticism, guys.^^ It helped a lot.^_^
To tell the truth, I basically winged the poemlet.
Just wrote it down with a vague idea of what sounded "poemy." I'm glad it turned out as well as it did, but it probably would sound better with some tweaking of the syllables, mainly the last one, as Nikkou said.^^
In regards to the ninja one...I was going for "playfully dark" rather than "despairingly dark..." though I may not have entirely succeded in that.^^;; I think that maybe I should have made it more clear that the transformee was happy in the end, and developed the person who transformed her in such a way that he had some sort of redeeming quality. But then again, it may not have made much difference, as one could argue that just because someone is happy after being mind altered, it doesn't mean it's not scary that they've been mind altered in the first place.^^;; And that's a perfectly understandable view.^^ I think the next time I try a mental alteration cap, I'll try to make it more focused on cuteness than sexuality, and try to make both the victim and the culprit more sympathetic, in an experiment to see if I can entertain a wider range of people, and develop my writing style.