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Bladeron's Captions

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 7:22 pm
by Bladeron
Since there's no reason for me not to give this a shot, here we are. All my captions, current and future, will be posted here. For now, though, here's my first ever caption for MSF!

Competition

Took me between thirty to forty-five minutes, mostly on account of getting proper text alignment. Constructive criticism is always welcome!

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:06 pm
by Rose
Sorry but there is some missing words

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:10 pm
by Bladeron
I went through it and none of the words are missing, at least not on my end. Could you pinpoint the locations where they're missing for you?

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:16 pm
by muffinstud
Didn't notice any missing words, but I did notice an interesting story. Not often that you find a caption based off a race like that. It's interesting, different, and good. For your first, I say bravo and encore.

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:18 pm
by Lucky
I'm likeing your caption. I hope you make more.
=)

I too never saw any missing words.
@____@

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 8:23 pm
by Bladeron
muffinstud wrote:Didn't notice any missing words, but I did notice an interesting story. Not often that you find a caption based off a race like that. It's interesting, different, and good. For your first, I say bravo and encore.


Well thank you! I actually had trouble working that out, because initially it was going to be a prank/bet, but I didn't like the way it kept coming out. Good to know the story was well-put! ^_^ More shall come, then!

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:24 pm
by UDDCommander
Good job, good writing, keep it up

PostPosted: Mon Aug 20, 2007 11:56 pm
by Stellar
*Stellar approves further .jpg's to be captioned in this thread* ^_^

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 12:41 am
by Rowan
That was great!

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 4:36 am
by Kalm
"Mike knew that would lose the race"

The way that is worded out makes it look like there's a word missing. I think that's probably what Ghost was talking about.

Anyways, it's an excellent caption. I hope to see more from you.

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:43 am
by Bladeron
Kalm wrote:"Mike knew that would lose the race"


Oh wow...I didn't even catch that one. Thanks for the save!
*scribble scribble*

And here's my number two!

Day at the Beach

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 7:35 am
by jimmyinwhite
not bad.

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:22 am
by Rose
They all have swimsuits...

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 9:30 am
by Bladeron
I've had this swimsuit theme in my mind for a little bit, and it actually helps me jog my imagination a little to make a variety of explanations for the same thing. The swimsuits won't last forever, don't worry. :)

PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:03 pm
by Funny Hat + Funny Accent
Nicely done!