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Ahiru's captions (links fixed)

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:10 pm
by Duck
Well.. a lotta these used to be here, but I neglected to update and they got deleted.. so here they are again

http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ns/BR1.gif
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... roMomo.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... RC-BR3.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... aption.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... eltry1.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ncecap.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... eSmack.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... /capie.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ption2.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... cookie.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ssshop.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... rinkin.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... s/fear.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ldfish.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ndyman.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... kajiko.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... aption.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... dshino.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... aption.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... koarmy.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... komata.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... newyou.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... /ninja.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... aption.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... toshot.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... njacap.gif
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ymaidy.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ns/pjs.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... aption.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... estudy.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... hornie.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... /water.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... s/wish.jpg
http://home.graffiti.net/theduckofanime ... ousins.jpg

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 3:14 pm
by Duck
also.. these are not in any real order.. so some are a lot older than others.

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 4:50 pm
by Sophia Anieri
graffiti.net wrote:404 - File Not Found

The requested URL was not found on this server

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 8:34 pm
by Kumi-chan
Wow! Ahiru. Those are so cool. Way better than any of mine. A few of them didn't work but most of them do. I like all of them.

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 9:27 pm
by Cutey Kerina
Yeah, some aren't working...mis-typed links?

Ooooo...a lot ot review O.O *giddy jumping*

I'll edit when I read all ^^

KuroMomo- Awww...that's so sweet look ^^ hehe

RCBR3? - I like the caption but the reference make no sense at all to me but cute

angel-caption - nifty and ethereal but I'm unsure if it's an Eternal reference or something else. Still nice though.

angeltry - hehe, that's silly, very nice one Ahiru and a good pose to use and nice writting.

capie - cute, nice use of image

caption 2 - umm...no caption showed up with this one.

cookie - aww..that's so cute. Nice writing too and great image.

dresshop - *turns head* hmmmm...I like the concept...is it an RP-based thing? Nice caption, the font is a little on the light side though.

drinkin - very cleverly done, a word cloud for the thought would be even niftier though but quite enjoyable, nice word arrangement.

fear - awww....*clombers the mysterious voice talking to her*...*hugs the girl*...on an objective note, nice word placement...except the "..."s are ,'s instead.

goldfish - that's such a lovely image and a nifty caption ^^.

handyman - nice caption.

kajiko - another no clue what this is referencing but fun ^^

kitty -nice idea and a good art

maxandshino - awww....^^ I really like this one...so sweet and beautiful. And for Max ^^ Thank you

Musa - Yay for Musa *dances* Nice one ^^

Nekoarmy - nice recutement poster ;)

Nekomata - nice one, I like the way the font is used, brief but I'm a little vague on the story behind. Plus it's a little hard to tell what's going on in the image.

Newyou - Interesting, definitely on the spooky side but a very nicely done caption. Maybe eliminate the "translation" part to make it flow more smoothly.

Ninja - awww...cute, very nicely done ^^

Ova - This one is probably my favorite, very much to the point but I think it need bolder text or a white-space extension with bold text to draw attention to it.

photoshoot - I stand corrected, this is very much my favorite too, you match the people with the image very well and very effective pause. Thank you ^^.

Pinkninja - Nicely composed but I'm not sure what the caption story means, the last line confused me, especially with the image.

pj - another nice pause one, cute, the text is used well here. Thank you.

thecaption - interesting, a little unsettling in some regard with the hint at the end. There's a little graphical error on the left side of the text btw.

thestudy - Oh I like this one! For several reasons, too bad the bottom text kinda faded into Chiyo-chan's uniform. Nicely done, quite nicely.

thornie - another really nice pause one with text across the image and it's almost perfect except the text at the end fades into the main character again.

water - I like the tone of this one, the text is kinda straight-forward, nice but again you have text fading (which makes it kinda tough to read) but I really like this one.

wish - awww...this one is really sweet. Cute, good text placement and a very nicely chosen image. Bravo ^^

youngcousins - Ok asside from the mind-numbing amount of cuteness ^^, very nice little story. Kinda vague but easy to understand. The only problem is the "d" is a little cut off in the first line

I really enjoyed all your caption. If you ever need help with proofing them, just feel free to ask sweetie. I want to help ^^.
Not working br1, aprenticecap, blondsmack, pinkmaidy.

PostPosted: Sat Nov 20, 2004 9:57 pm
by Sophia Anieri
Seems I only checked the links that were dead... I should have been more thorough.

All in all, great work, Duck. My favorite one was the peeping tom who doesn't realize he's been changed... But they were all exceptionally good.

Thanks for posting!

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 12:20 am
by opus`
Very nice, Ahiru.

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by Pyro Infernos
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They don't work for me. Sorry.

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:32 pm
by Cutey Kerina
Owwie O.O....want me to help with hosting them on Photobucket sweetie?

PostPosted: Sun Nov 21, 2004 10:28 pm
by Duck
... yeah.. i guess doin all these at once would get my graffiti overloaded

Major, thanks for you comments and criticisms (hey if i don't find my mistakes.. how will i get better)

everyone else.. thanks for you comments.. i'll try and get em fixed up somehow.

PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 12:21 am
by Cutey Kerina
*hugs Ahiru ^^*

get of the reviews

br1 - Can I get one of those? *tail wag*

apprentice - aww.,.poor sweetie. I hope she's ok. Nice caption though.

blondsmack - Ohhh! I remember that one ^^ Really cute, probably one of my favorites you've done. Very good combination of everything going really great.

pinkmaidy - cute! and a lot of pink ^^;

PostPosted: Mon Nov 22, 2004 8:50 pm
by Duck
da major wrote:br1 - Can I get one of those? *tail wag*


Talk to hikari.. she may be able to help.. least board wise ^^;;

PostPosted: Sun Dec 05, 2004 10:20 pm
by Skyblue
Wow I really liked those. Good work Ahiru, I'll be on the look out for more of your material.

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:10 pm
by Duck
I really need to get back workin on some of these... hmm *goes on a hunt*

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:13 pm
by Kumi-chan
Me too. Sis if you want I could show you some images I have. *has many images on her compy*