Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Lioconvoy** » Sat Dec 18, 2004 4:03 pm

Since I'm away from my home computer with my collection of images set aside to caption, I've re-captioned some of my older MSF captioned images for MA.

I'm slightly curious what people think about them in comparison.

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... /Dairy.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 1&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... shment.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 2&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... /Flute.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 0&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... 20fun..jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 9&viewkey=

by **Coruscate** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 3:57 am

Alright, for one you've brought more story to your captions. Your original ones are almost one liners. These new ones are better because they tell a fuller story.

Secondly the contrast of the text color to the background color is far improved in your new ones. The "Dairy" piece is a no-no of text color and font. Though your font size doesn't have to be as huge as they are in some, and I prefer to put my caption text under the image, as the format of text fits easier there. If we were Japanese speakers, writing it vertically would work better but we're not so...

As far as content goes, you're using more than MtF which is applaudable and you're not relying on the same old story and are trying to use varied forms of change and varied intentions.

Much improved.

If I were a teacher scoring you, your original captions would earn a C, but your new ones would earn a B- at the lowest, B+ at the highest. A little more experimentation can take you further.

by **Musashi** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 5:18 am

Yeah, I like the different-ness. XD *Hug~* B+ from da Musa, too! ^_^

by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 5:54 am

WOW! Quite impressive. Yeah, the new ones are really incredible and thank you for having both for comparison. I'd say A- here, particularly for the one with the flute, that was really beautiful ^_^

by **Lioconvoy** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 6:17 am

The idea for the newer caption to the Flute pic came from a discusion with Akemi. She personally thinks females I superiour, I don't. I think we're both equal.

At Gaia, I've spent some time with CD's and so making some CD captions instead of just transformation ones seem to fit my current mood.

The two animal to human ones just seemed to fit pictures, and Musa's favorite is something I've been wanting to do since I saw that picture.

by **Ninian** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 8:58 am

My feelings on females mostly stem from genetics and genetics in relation to spirituality more than Valerie Solanas kinda stuff, for the record ^^;

by **Lioconvoy** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 9:31 am

Akemi wrote:My feelings on females mostly stem from genetics and genetics in relation to spirituality more than Valerie Solanas kinda stuff, for the record ^^;

*shrugs* I still think guys and girls are equal, genetically, spiritually, and physiologically. Don't know what Valerie Solanas is though.

The only thing all agree with is girls have better taste. I'm told they taste like chicken and guys taste like three day old gym socks. Mind you this is second hand information. I've never eaten either girls or guys.

by **Erick Guardian** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 12:52 pm

I certainly hope not.

by **Lioconvoy** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:21 pm

Erick Guardian wrote:I certainly hope not.

This coming from the guy who's avatar is spelled out in blood..........

by **Erick Guardian** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:32 pm

And your point is?

by **Ninian** » Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:42 pm

My inner Nekomata knows more about the flavor of flesh than I'd care to disclose >_>

by **Lioconvoy** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 7:22 am

More to compare:

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... Switch.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 1&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... evenge.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 2&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... 20wish.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 0&viewkey=

Mind you that last one is really just a change in text style and background. The Text itself is exactly the same.

by **Ninian** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 8:12 am

I think "Birthday Wish" is one of your best. It's really cute and the story fits the caption very well.

On another note, I think your Void one is neat because that almost perfectly reflects what I feel the afterlife represents (the more disciplined a mind, the better the chance to create a pleasant infinity instead of a chaotic and violent one that has brimstone smell as a custom option)

by **Lioconvoy** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 12:24 pm

*shrugs* The Void series doesn't really have anything to do with the afterlife. Just a few people some how get trapped in a void and the form they take there is what ever think of strongest. In my case it's a Kitsune, in this case it's school girls in gym clothes.

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 3&viewkey=

Original: http://www.magicalsailorfuku.net/images ... hieves.jpg

by **Ninian** » Sat Dec 25, 2004 1:16 pm

That's a pretty neat concept. You should write it.

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