Magical Sailor Fuku

ok these are my first captions i've ever made, but I love this thread and so I finally made my own captions cause its so cool ^ ^


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... e/Wish.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... Dancer.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... Shrine.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... 6bd5ca.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... a7bf26.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... 91d94d.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... Spring.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/ ... 25f2d7.jpg


ok ok So please let me know what you think, they are my first captions after all ^ ^

Good stuff. I think I like "wish" the best.

I liked the Magic acadamey one. The ones I like are the Non-Bad-boy-to-Good-girl types. I have trouble empathsizing with those who "Deserve it" ^_^ I like your choice in pictures.

I'm trying not to get too hog wild posting here...

But I want to say you're one of the most natural talents I've seen at Captioneering. Every story is concise, well laid out, and makes good use of both long and short text. If this is your first, I'm impressed.

Though you might want to switch up themes a bit ^^; Too many seem to result in the same end. That's my only complaint. If you want to specialize, I'm not discouraging it (I specialize in several types of exclusive TF captions) but it'd make your audience wider.

Not much I can say... I mean, it's more because I come across these kind of captions more often than not. ^_^; But your grammar and spelling is decent, and the stories aren't too complicated or confusing. And it's probably just me, but there was a little lack of identification between image and story for some of them... I guess I'm hung up on solid connections, which is a style in itself. >.<

Wow that's alot of them. And don't be so scrutinizing Evil.

I liked Wish the best, too. Neat captions all round, though. ^^

well thanks '^ ^ there is a certin kind of caption I like as far as style or story gos, I wanted to try and keep them fairly simple just cause i've been turned off by some captions that seemed more like short stories set images than a caption. I don't min dim you use the images, i mean they arent mine after all heh. And I've seen other captions that try to hard to connect themselves to the images, even though I might be guilty of that here.

I was being a critic, Alex. O.o Few say exactly what they see in captions from their own personal view, and that's what I did.

And as far as personal views goes, we all have our own. I generally like all captions because of the effort alone, and a bit more so if the grammar and spelling is good. But one of the tastes I like, is variety. And it shows in my own captions. I do what I like, others do what they like; we all have something we favor in captions. Here, I enjoyed ElanaSilvereye's captions for the most part, with the exception being that there was a recurring theme in most. It's not supposed to be taken personally.

Very nice work. Everything is pretty clear story wise (though sometimes word choice could be just slightly better) but they ar all very very good.

I like them a lot... Your tone is very good, as is your picture and word choice. ^^