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Captions of a Cheeto, er..Chiaki.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:04 pm
by Bowser ala Femme
Whelp, here are some captions by moi. 'Tis my first attempt, so any critique is welcome. Anywho, here we are, in handy link form:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/Itokuzu/Captions/onoe1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/Itokuzu/Captions/onoe2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v318/Itokuzu/Captions/onoe3.jpg

Umm..enjoy. <.<

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:20 pm
by Mistress Guendolen
Pretty good, especially for your first outing. I liked the reversal in the first two; usually it's the other way around. Good match-up with the images. And the last one was just fun; talk about getting back at someone, eh? I loved the kitty lying on her foot. Very cute. :) Now, I did notice two typos, one in each of the first two. But overall, I'd say good work, and be sure to make more when you get inspired.

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:38 pm
by Mitera Nikkou
Yes, I do say that you did a good job. Although, since I saw the image in the second caption a week or so ago, I've been wondering if it's a guy or a girl. It's always hard for me to tell. :) What do you think? XD

PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 11:56 pm
by Mistress Guendolen
It looks like a guy to me, albeit a pretty delicate one. It's obvious this person is post-pubescent, and girls that age typically have at least some chest. This person was absolutely flat. I say male, even if a bit on the androgynous side of it.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 12:51 am
by Musashi
OMG CHIAPET! *GLOMP* FtM captions...! *SMUSH* Da Musa likes them verra much, yus indeedy! :3 Hee, I have that second picture. XD I'm glad it got put to use.

And KITTY ON A FOOT. I want a kitty on my foot, too. ;__;

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 1:51 am
by Chibi MitchellTF
Musashi wrote:OMG CHIAPET! *GLOMP* FtM captions...! *SMUSH* Da Musa likes them verra much, yus indeedy! :3 Hee, I have that second picture. XD I'm glad it got put to use.

And KITTY ON A FOOT. I want a kitty on my foot, too. ;__;


Trust me. You do NOT want a cat on your foot...This is from personal experience. They use their CLAWS to stay ON! And they look cute doing it!

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 11:58 am
by Becca
Very cute Miss Chiaki.

The kitty on the foot was adorable.

If the second one is a guy.....why would he be blushing and covering his chest?

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:12 pm
by Musashi
Well, looks close enough to a guy. XD And when I first found the piccu, it was in a male anime section. And it works for an FtM caption... I mean, it must be kind of startling to suddenly have nothing there, and then to be walked in on.

PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:30 pm
by Mistress Guendolen
Hey, it's not an isolated instance. A lot of guys in anime could pass for girls if you put them in a dress. Heck, he'd probably look better than I would. :P There's something about the facial features that says "guy" to me. It's just that bishounen tend to be androgynous. Not to mention that a boy surprised while dressing is just as likely to want to cover up quickly, right? It's human nature. Besides, maybe it's a particularly modest character. We don't know his origins, after all. He's probably the sort to blush when flirted with. ;)

PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:04 am
by Kumi-chan
Cool. Nice ones Chiaki. Glad to see you around too.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 3:49 pm
by Katty
they were good cations. can't wait to see you follow then up.
I think that in number 2, it is a mid transform. Girl to guy. But that is just me.

PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 8:29 pm
by Selena Aninikkou
MitchellTF wrote:Trust me. You do NOT want a cat on your foot...This is from personal experience. They use their CLAWS to stay ON! And they look cute doing it!


Cats aren't the only animals who like to use their claws to get as high on you as they can...

The large scratches on my arms from my dog is testament to that.

PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 1:22 am
by Chibi MitchellTF
Selena Aninikkou wrote:
MitchellTF wrote:Trust me. You do NOT want a cat on your foot...This is from personal experience. They use their CLAWS to stay ON! And they look cute doing it!


Cats aren't the only animals who like to use their claws to get as high on you as they can...

The large scratches on my arms from my dog is testament to that.


You should meet Delta, my girlfriend's dog.

A tribute to felines~!

PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:20 pm
by Bowser ala Femme

PostPosted: Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:24 pm
by hime-chan
the first and the last one are the same ¬_¬