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Kirokusclone's captions

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:49 am
by Kirokusclone
Ok, this is where I am going to post images I caption, and where you can tell me what you think
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Yes I know, it's stupid abotu a free swimming lesson contract, but the face was perfect for this

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 10:43 am
by Kirokusclone
so what woudl anyoen give it?

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 10:44 am
by Chibi MitchellTF
It's average, but you really need to spell-check it. It's a nice picture, that fits with the caption.

Still, the misspellings hurt it.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 10:48 am
by Kirokusclone
What did I spell wrong?

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 1:31 pm
by Beyond
Pretty short but I like it.

There is a "now" made "noy" that jumps towards my face like a half life face huggler

<__<

>__>

source of the image?

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 2:06 pm
by P-tan
One of the things I plan to do this year is to make a caption as soon as I could install things again and learn how to do it. (The paradox will go through the distance to spite it)

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 2:37 pm
by Kirokusclone
i've fixed it

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:06 pm
by Stellar
Very cute =)

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:24 pm
by Beyond
animeh8r wrote:One of the things I plan to do this year is to make a caption as soon as I could install things again and learn how to do it. (The paradox will go through the distance to spite it)


Paint is enough to make captions.

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 3:26 pm
by Stellar
But paint is a horrible program x_x download.com has tons of free photo editing progarams that are better =D

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:12 pm
by Miyukicl
Paint is nice for do a caption...exept when you try of do a collage caption :P, by the way nice first try :) Kirokusclone you caption have potential . If the Msfers understand my captions ( with all my Miyukian's crazy english) then you can is quiet :)

PostPosted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:19 pm
by Kara-chan
Not bad ^_^

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 10:01 am
by Kirokusclone
I have added a second picture

PostPosted: Thu Oct 05, 2006 3:08 pm
by Anamnesis
Add an 'as' after 'blushing,' and replace the 'that' with a comma.
^_^

captions

PostPosted: Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:14 pm
by pink cloud
nice captions