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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Maiden Miki » Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:03 pm

Raleigh wrote:Raoul was the loser of this round, Mia. There is one loser a round and me and Raoul lost first and then he lost to me. That means you are still in the game.

"Oh! I lost? I guess I miss understood the rules," said Mia as she looked happy. She then looked at Raleigh and smiled, "Thank you very much for informing me Mr. Raleigh. Now for the Haiku..."

Mia stood there thinking about what to say. She ran a hand though her hair and then sighed.

"Cute is right as rain,
Not cute is not great at all,
Let spread cute today,"

Mia looked a bit nervous and said, "I not sure that was really great. I hope that is right."
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Raleigh » Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:05 pm

Nice. I liked the subject matter, Dact.
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Remi » Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:34 pm

"Three for Three sir Dact, it seems all your good luck has been saved up for this competition... it would explain how many of you ended up owned by Alexis.."

*She looks to Mia*as for your prize...*and spins abruptly towards Raleigh*A perfect Geisha Doll named Rei...

*and with that the large cloaked figure shrinks signficantly leaving him just under five feet, his body loses musclemass, chest expands out and she is left dainty and feminine. Her hair grows out red and clothing reshapes leaving her abit like
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Of course much like the others a final change comes her skin pales as it takes on the feeling and look of porcalin but with the near indestructability of well a golem that happens to be an aspect of Raleigh.. either way she is Dact's prize a Geisha.


*Remi Giggles*Final Round, Storytelling.
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Raleigh » Sat Aug 06, 2011 7:52 pm

If I was a less sporting individual I would say that was planned. Too bad it wasn't the story telling first. Oh well, on the bright side I now have an excuse to use those smoke techniques I know if needs be. Its so hard to have a reason to have a pipe most of the time. *Remains seated for now to see where this goes.*
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Maiden Miki » Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:07 pm

"Oh...." said Mia who was a bit worried when Remi looked at her concerning the prize. She then gave a smile of relief and said to Rel, "I feel horrible for being glad that you lost but relieved it wasn't me. I am sorry for your lost. You did create a good Haiku in my opinion Miss Rel.

"Now for storytelling...Hmm...Can you please tell us some information? Anything we want? Anything else we should know?" asked Mia as she thought about a possible story. "Sorry for asking you so many questions."
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Remi » Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:09 pm

"whoever can tell the most entertaining story wins, you will automatically lose if its fanfiction. God help you if its fanfiction.. all the Gods help you even"
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Raleigh » Sat Aug 06, 2011 8:35 pm

Thank you Mia I liked yours as well. So in other words, for those playing, I suppose they shouldn't have a story about Bob who while in Yellowstone fell into a hotspring that causes him to turn into a girl or a young boy named Naruto who falls in love with a girl named Sakura in high school either, yes?
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Maiden Miki » Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:40 am

"Hmm...This is kind of hard....Entertaining?" said Mia as she seem a bit unsure. She ran a hand though her hair and hummed. "OH! I think I have one!"

"There was once a young girl that was named Elena," started off Mia as she smiled. "The girl was a beautiful teenage girl but lacked confidence. She would always find herself in situations that bother her. Either she fell on her face after tripping or walking into walls. She wasn't clumsy in the least but was always low on luck that have roots to her confidence."

"Then one day Elena met a young man her age as she walked to her next class. It just happen as she was walking and without looking had found herself bumping into him. She slowly looked up and found a face belonging to a cute teenager. Elena's face turned red as her mind at once knew this boy was somebody she could be close to. Still her nervous had a tight grip on her mind as she looked at him. Elena wanted to say sorry and ask for his name but could only stutter as she ran down the hallway of the school."

"Eventually Elena found out that the boy was named Aaron due to hearing what other girls say. She found out that he was on the Kendo team and was semipopular for a sophomore. They even had a few classes together but Elena never noticed him due to always keeping to herself. Eventually Aaron came up to her after recognizing her as the one that bumped into him a few days ago. She didn't say anything as the boy talked. Eventually he invited her to lunch. Elena didn't say anything but followed him. That all he needed for a response."

"Elena and Aaron continue to enjoy lunch together and eventually spending a bit more time together. Elena was slowly becoming a bit comfortable with Aaron. She discovered that he had two younger siblings, a brother and a sister, while she shared that she was an only child. One day Aaron had invited Elena to his house in order to work on their math homework. Elena wanted to ask first but wasn't able to. She was too afraid what Aaron would say but was worse was that Elena couldn't respond back."

"Still she found herself on the bus with Aaron riding to his house. The bus was fairly empty and quiet. Elena didn't mind this completely but wish that she could say something. Aaron then asked, "Are you nervous?""

"Elena was surprised by this question. She played with the strap of her bag and just nodded. Eventually she said, "Yes.""

""How come?" asked Aaron as he sounded a bit surprise by the answer. The bus jumped a bit due to a pothole. "I think by now that you would be use to being around me. I think you are pretty cool.""

"Elena's heart began to pound. Each heartbeat was harder then the last. She wanted to say that it was due to her feelings for him. That the nervous she felt around him was different from the ones she felt from everybody else. It was that she couldn't say it. The mere act would be too much for her to do. Still Elena knew that she had to say something. Something that was at least close to the truth. It was now or never."

"Then everything happened in an instant. A speeding truck had hit the bus at an intersection. The force of the trunk had made the bus slide on the road throwing the young teens around like rag dolls. Glass flew as metal bars bust as the bus came to a stop. Elena looked up to see blood dripping down the face of Aaron. She then felt something running along the side of her face and could only guess blood. Panic was running though her mind wondering was Aaron okay. She slowly whisper, "Aaron....are you....""

""Yes but my body," said Aaron as he tried to move but was unable to. Elena looked around and saw that his legs were twisted in ways that she never thought she would see with blood coming out quickly. She then noticed that Aaron's eyes had widen."

""What is wrong?" asked Elena. Breathing had started to become harder as she spoke. Her vision was becoming fuzzy. She coughs up blood as Aaron pointed to her chest."

""Your chest," said Aaron as he rested his hand on her's. Elena had looked down to see that metal pipe had lodge itself in her chest. It didn't went though her heart but most likely had went though a lung. She knew her chances of living were slim. Elena's mind was racing and wonder what she should do now. Sirens could be heard in the distance as she could see though her blur vision that Aaron was breathing heavily as well. Her mind began to give her flashes of the moments leading up to this. Sitting on the bus. Talking to Aaron. Her nervous hands as Aaron asked her why she was nervous. She still hadn't answer him. Elena took a deep breath trying to calm herself. She didn't know if she even had a future but if she didn't then Elena better do it."

""I love you," said Elena as she slowly closed her eyes. Her head was getting dizzy as yells were being heard in the background. Elena's vision was becoming darker and it was getting harder to hear but she could swear she heard Aaron's voice calling out to her before everything going dark and silent."

"Oh dear," said Mia as she took a few deep breaths and fanned herself. "That was quite a long story. I didn't mean meant for it to be so long. I hope that is alright."
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Raleigh » Sun Aug 07, 2011 6:49 am

*Blowing out a puff of smoke from her pipe, Rei sits back in her chair.* A bit depressing there Mia. Then again I suppose most 'love' stories are. Still, at least it didn't end in a murder suicide unlike some others I know. *She had sent Kuro away earlier to kill off a cult that had gotten a hold of a powerful magical book and to retrieve the book for her collection.*
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Feng » Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:56 pm

"Give it your best shot, Messier Dactylos," says Raoul-Tan, smiling. "Zis contest should be eazy for someone of your caliber, non?"
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Maiden Miki » Sun Aug 07, 2011 10:59 pm

Raleigh wrote:*Blowing out a puff of smoke from her pipe, Rei sits back in her chair.* A bit depressing there Mia. Then again I suppose most 'love' stories are. Still, at least it didn't end in a murder suicide unlike some others I know. *She had sent Kuro away earlier to kill off a cult that had gotten a hold of a powerful magical book and to retrieve the book for her collection.*

"Oh? Was it?" asked Mia with a smile. She then gave a nervous laugh and then said, "I thought it was a bit cute. Then again I am told that my stories sometimes end up a bit morbid."
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Raleigh » Mon Aug 08, 2011 8:46 pm

I know I'm not still in the contest but I'm so tempted to tell a story anyway while we wait.
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Remi » Tue Aug 09, 2011 3:35 pm

*taps foot looking at Dact*
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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Knight Errant » Fri Aug 12, 2011 5:13 pm

((Sorry, been hit with several days of feeling really bleh about posting.))

"Kind of morbid there... but lets see...." He clears his throat, sitting down and beginning. "O Muse, sing in me, and through me tell the story of the young man, strong and brave. A youth burning for approval, and the story of how his actions changed a kingdom."

"Today I will tell the story of Jaemad, a prince brave and strong. Third in line for the throne behind his elder brothers, Jaemad burned to find a way to prove himself to his father the King. But as the years dragged on, he feared he would find no way of doing so. He trained his body in combat with the castle guard, his mind with study and magical lore with the court mages... but he never got an opportunity to fight more than bandits or wild beasts, such was the peaceful state of the kingdom."

"Fate finally intervened one day as the news came that a village on the outskirts of the kingdom had been attacked. Bordering a vast and unexplored forest, the culprits could have been anyone or anything. Not missing what might be a one in a lifetime chance, Jaemad mounted up with the soldiers, riding off to the distant town of Briton."

"When they finally got there, there were no townspeople to greet them. The whole town was eerily quiet... seemingly abandoned. Then out of the woodwork they came, a monstrous tide of half human half snake Naga. Soon the guard were beset by monsters they had only heard of in fairy tails, and begun to fell under blade, claw, and fang."

"Jaemad saw his friends and companions being cut down, and rallied them. Stirring them with impassioned speech and bold actions, he rode forth into the scaled tide. The guards, driven by their duty to protect the prince, fought with a renewed courage. They fought amongst the deserted town for hours, and as twilight fell the last of the monsters were slain. The ranks of the guardsmen had been reduced to seven, which with their weary but living prince made eight. Not wishing to remain among the carcasses of the fallen, they began the trip back to the capitol on foot. Most of the horses being lost, the few left used to carry their supplies."

"However, it was at least a two day trip to the nearest town on foot... and death does not like being cheated. Eight camped down that night, six rose the next morning. Having perished from the venom of their enemy. That was reduced to five... when a horse and the rear guard of their procession simply... vanished on the road. It was then that the Prince began to suspect something following them... but there was little they could do but press onward with their journey."

"That night they awoke to a great thrashing and screaming of horses. The remaining men rushed out, weapons in hand, to see a massive shape outlined against the night sky. A snake as thick around as an ancient tree and just as long had surrounded their camp. Defiant even in the face of nearly certain death... the prince rushed forward to stab the giant serpent. Unfortunately, it was like striking a sheet of iron scales... and it did nothing but bring the attention of the beast."

"Looking down upon its quarry, the glowing yellow eyes seemed to pierce into the men's souls. The four guards and their prince found themselves paralyzed... unable to do anything but quake in fear as the snake slowly swallowed the prince and three of his guard. Turning to the last and speaking in a hissing tone. It told him he would be spared as the messenger of the coming of the Serpent Queen. And he would be seeing his prince again... As if to punctuate that statement, the serpent laid four giant eggs, the outline of a man just able to be made out underneath the leathery surface."

"And so it was this story was brought to the king and court by the sole remaining guard. A great evil had been let loose upon the lands. The Serpent Queen and her new Princess would come to terrorize and conquer, aimed at swallowing the land whole. But that is a story for another time. This is just of the beginning."

((I would have liked to make this story much more descriptive... but just cant muster the ambition. Might rewrite it on my own sometime...))
O Muse!
Sing in me, and through me tell the story
Of that man skilled in all the ways of contending,
A wanderer, harried for years on end...

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Re: A Contest! Fabulous Prizes! No purchase necissary

Postby Remi » Fri Aug 12, 2011 6:31 pm

*bounces towards Mia with a small vacuum cleaner and sucks her up inside, She then bounces over to dact and pulls a small bronze Lamp from inside the vacuum*"your prize for this round...and for your grand prizes...

*she quickly pours a bucket of gasoline on Dact.. and sets him on fire.. of course rather than burn him in a painful death way but like the flames that burned away Hercules' mortal weaknesses. He feels stronger all the while his flesh shrinks back becoming smooth and Feminine. His chest rises while his manhood is pulled inward. Soon he is a she with a nice pair of breasts but the changes continue, her eyes become slitted and green her hair grows red and out down her back.

Her next change is one to better clarify her now inhuman nature a pair of horns grow from her head, a pair of draconic wings her back and finally a proper tail telling the world she is a dragon girl.

Of course the dragon girl looks abit comical at first in her oversized armor so the last change is to make her clothing more fitting in form to show off her new shape. Its not armor.. but then her skin alone can blunt the strongest swords so who needs armor at this point?

A Dragon girl with her new little hoard of prizes*

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*after the change Remi offers the new girl a glowing cube*here your final final prize.
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