Proof is in the pudding
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Proof is in the pudding
by SweetSophia » Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:29 pm
Can I get someone to look over a story I've writen, any corrections and or constructive criticism would be contenting.
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by Mitera Nikkou » Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:50 pm
Sure, I can try. XD I can't say I'm very dependable, though. ^_^; I guess send it via e-mail?
Me <-- Nikkou@gmail.com
Me <-- Nikkou@gmail.com
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by SweetSophia » Sun Aug 21, 2005 2:55 pm
Ok thank you. 
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by Mitera Nikkou » Sun Aug 21, 2005 3:35 pm
I hope my feedback was of some help. You can contact me anytime for proofing, if you want. Don't mind me. ;p And since today is my first day where I get cut a break, it's about time I finished other proof reading. <.<;
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