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Postby May-chan » Wed Mar 07, 2007 9:27 pm

I contributed to those pictures!!! :P :P :P
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:10 pm

Relax :-p I gave you credit for finding a number of them. The Ami_6 one. The Ms. Ishida sketch. The Jamie and Kimi images (and the color-edit on the eyes, I believe). Someone else fixed Katsumi's hair though, I think. And Nathan.

The rest were found by me. Also you found a couple of others I decided to save in my Photobucket.

Thank you very much, May-chan. And now. I will zap you without mercy :-p
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Postby Sophia Anieri » Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:40 am

Wow, it is Nana! And the other sketches realy helped me see the characters better! Good job!
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Postby Hikari Anijane » Thu Mar 08, 2007 1:58 am

Cutey Kerina wrote:Someone else fixed Katsumi's hair though, I think.


>.> <.< No, I totally didn't do that. Really.






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Postby Gee-chan » Sat Mar 17, 2007 11:52 am

Wow, this is like....Wow!

This is an excellent story. Wish I could go to Anime World, that would be so cool. Interresting approach for the psycological effects of the gradual change, epesially with the different characters.

Please, Please, Please, keep updating. I NEED MORE!!

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Postby Cutey Kerina » Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:09 pm

Thank you very much. I'm roughly halfway through Chapter 16 (7400 words). It's been a slow chapter but I intend to finally reveal a series of major elements about what's going on by the end of this chapter.
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Sat Mar 24, 2007 12:05 am

9500 now and I think the climax will come soon.
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Postby May-chan » Sun Mar 25, 2007 4:35 pm

I was at the end of a section so I saved and turned to look. She was new. I didn’t remember her myself. Nor did I remember the one next to her with bright blond hair and a modest, black-velvet maid’s outfit. The redhead, though, I thought I remembered. She had on a dark blue top with swimming trunks. She looked so demure with her glasses on. She was blushing a little. She wasn’t as busty as the other two but she had a very lovely figure. And the right height too.


durrr, I can't believe I missed that the first time (I went back to read some of the first pages again...) :P silly me.
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Wed Mar 28, 2007 2:42 am

Cute fan :-p

And new Mecchen is posted.
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Tue Apr 03, 2007 8:19 pm

As always, I welcome feedback. I understand it's a lot to read but this has been a project of mine with continual work (roughly 500 words a day) coming on one year now.
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Postby Queen Octavia » Mon Apr 09, 2007 6:53 pm

Wow, I just read all 16 chapters thus far, and I have mixed feelings.

One, it was awesome, and I love it.

And two, I totally had an assignment I had to get started much earlier than this, curse your page-turning story! ;p

Took a while for my small brain to get all the girls sorted out in my mind, but after six or seven chapters I loved 'em all.

Pretty amazing job writing a transformation story of this length, the plot is simply marvelous.

Now, however, it is time to work until ~4 AM on my assignment... *cries*
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:58 am

Oop ^^;; Apologies on making you late for your assignment but glad you liked it so far.
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Postby Taralynn » Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:37 am

I have to concur with many of the statements that have been made. The story has been very well written and chapter 16 was no exception. I do get lost at times with all the characters but that's just a natural offshoot of having a lot of characters. Very well done.
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Mon Apr 30, 2007 6:41 pm

Update with chapter 17, just fyi.
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Postby AnimaVex » Sun May 27, 2007 12:54 am

Still loving it, just like I love your avatar. XD Makes me laugh...
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