Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Haylie** » Wed Jul 18, 2007 1:16 pm

2 words: Tomb. Raider.
No, really. Tomb Raider. No, not with Lara Croft. This one's totally different. It's a different person starring in it, a guy of my own creation, so cool off.
This one starts off in a tomb in Asia, just off the west coast by... a couple hundred miles. Tell me what you think of it so far:

[quote]â€œCâ€™mon, slowpoke. Youâ€™re taking too long. Iâ€™m already at the final chamber, I just need help getting in,â€

by **muffinstud** » Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:16 pm

Interesting. I like a good action/adventure story. Just one thing: do they have radios or are they shouting? Cuz the way it was written they seemed to start off quite a distance from each other.

by **Haylie** » Wed Jul 18, 2007 2:40 pm

They have radios. If you've played any of the Tomb Raider games, you'd know what I'm talking about. Sorry, I'll try to put more details in there.

by **Haylie** » Fri Jul 20, 2007 10:15 am

Guess what: The story's up! Go to the "Stories" page under Video Game Fanfics and read it! WOOOO! :lol:

by **Haylie** » Fri Jul 20, 2007 7:10 pm

Hooo-kay, I know you probably don't care, but I have a quick idea for a second chapter. I have no structure, and I haven't started writing yet, but it's an idea. I'm not even certain how to go about getting to it, but it's good.

If you have any ideas or suggestons for TR ch2, PM, email, or just post here. The latter is easier, just making sure you have your options. Free ideas for a poor moron, anyone? Please?

by **Haylie** » Mon Jul 30, 2007 1:43 pm

Say hello to a quick sample of part 2:

[quote]â€œStill no luck, cousin?â€

by **Tiffany Grimm** » Mon Jul 30, 2007 2:54 pm

^I like it very much actually! Michelle is so awesome!

by **Haylie** » Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:59 pm

Bang. Storie's been sent, and it should turn up with the next update.

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