Magical Sailor Fuku

Can I get someone to look over a story I've writen, any corrections and or constructive criticism would be contenting.

Sure, I can try. XD I can't say I'm very dependable, though. ^_^; I guess send it via e-mail?

Me <-- Nikkou@gmail.com

Ok thank you.

I hope my feedback was of some help. You can contact me anytime for proofing, if you want. Don't mind me. ;p And since today is my first day where I get cut a break, it's about time I finished other proof reading. <.<;