Untitled Story (pt. 1) by Jayme
Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 9:58 pmMy name is James Tolten, or at least it was a few days ago, you see a few days ago something strange happened to me, but before I go too far, lets start this story, you see a few days ago I had a dream....
....in this dream I was running, I couldn't see anything around me except for a gray floor, and lights that illuminated my path. Everything else was surrounded by shadows and my hair kept hitting me in the face. Thats not possible though, I keep my hair pretty short, and while it was longer than most boys hair, it wouldn't be long enough to hit me in the face. What was going on here? I wasn't even running as fast as I normally could, and despite anything I tried I couldn't looked down, or to the side, and I couldn't stop. Was this a dream? Am I dead? Whats going on here?!
I woke up in a cold sweat, and looked around the room its still dark out, and my computer is gone. The light that usually illuminates my my room is gone, and my A/C isn't running so im really hot. My first and only thought is that the electricity must've went out again, I rolled over and slowly drifted back to sleep ignoring my uncomfortableness passing it off as heat from no A/C. The dream resumed, but things were alot brighter, I notice several faces I haven't seen in years Krystal Remshaw is the one that sticks out the most, she's beautiful. She stands about 5'2 at least the last time I saw her in 9th grade. Her face is beautiful with gorgeous green eyes, long brown hair that goes to her shoulders, its silky. Why is her face so clear though, shouldn't it be blurry after his all time? I dont know whats going on, thats when I hear a bang on my wall followed by the sound of my mom's voice.
"Alright! Time to get up and get ready for school" she bangs on the wall again, and I hear her walk away. I groan confused mainly because I haven't been in school for at least 2 years, I shrug it off and sit up scratching the back of my head, my hair feels a bit smoother, longer even, but I dont pay any attention to it really. I haven't had a haircut in a while. I spin a bit, hang my legs off the bed, and get up. I almost stumble as something feels off almost like bed is taller than usual. My eyes are still blurry and I cant really see straight thanks to it, so I forget about that. My pants hanging off my hips and I have to hold them up, I dont pay much attention to it though. I have been losing a bit of weight lately, with weight lifting and exercises, the fact I have to hold my pants up is kind of nice for my ego.
I stumble out of my room, and into the bathroom, I nearly trip over discarded clothing that someone left out. I walk forward a bit and turn, where I take my normal relaxed position right in front of the toilet. I release my hold on my pants and boxers and they fall to the floor, I reach down between my legs only to get a palm full of air. I blink confused and scramble around for it, until I realize the fact that IT's gone. I let out a scream, its oddly high-pitched, the pitch of it could wake the dead if it was possible.
I was a girl, somehow, I had become a girl my member was gone. What else could I do in this situation, despite how I hard I was trying, what with the higher emotions I currently had thanks to this body, and the fact that I just lost my malehood, I broke down crying. My mom came running from the scream only to see a crying girl there in her son's clothes, pants and underwear around her ankles, the clothes obviously big for her. My mom looked different though, younger, healthier. I looked backwards into the mirror, and I couldn't believe what I saw, staring back at me was a cute girl with long brown hair, sparkling brown eyes, small A cup breasts, wearing a black t-shirt with a skull on the chest, tears rolling down her face. She looked almost like I would if I had been born a girl, just younger.
"Oh no.. Oh no no no!" I had somehow become a girl and to make things even worse I had somehow been sent back about 6 years. I was 15 years old, and female.. with no clue on how it happened. My mom looked even more shocked than me, and why wouldn't she be? Seeing a strange girl half-nude crying in your bathroom isn't something that happens everyday. I stared at my mom and tried to form words, but none would come, we both just stood there staring at each other, her look was shock, my look was a mixture of fear, shock, and confusion.
"H-Hi Mom..." I managed to squeak out, my voice was so quiet, it was even quieter than Krystal's was way back then. My mom's look of shock turned to confusion..
".....Who are you?" she managed to ask me, despite everything she was seeing.
"Its me, James... I think, I dont look like myself.. obviously" I managed to squeak out again, my horrible sense of explaining anything once again making itself painfully obvious.
My mom didn't say much "You cant miss school because of this you know. Unfortunately, you've missed enough days, whether your a girl or not, you have to get dressed, dont worry ill take you today, we'll sort this out I promise" and with that she walked away, I couldn't believe it, I had to go to school like this too! Just great, as if I wasn't having a hard enough time with girls as it was. I pulled my pants up and stumbled back to my room. I sit on my bed, looking around my room for at least 10 minutes, nothing had changed, it was still as messy as ever, my clothes thrown all over the room, my SNES plugged into my TV, the Final Fantasy IV cartridge in it. I haven't played that game in about 5 years, it was funny seeing it again.
I figured id put it off enough, and kicked off my clothes, I didn't wanna see myself naked not yet. I still wasn't ready to accept this, maybe it was all a dream either way I had to get dressed so I slid on a fresh pair of boxers, an old pair of jeans, tossed on a new black t-shirt, and threw on an old sweater. I figured this would at least hide I was a girl to those at a distance. I grabbed an old cap and in cliche fashion, tucked my hair under it, and smiled. There! Despite my cuter face, weight loss, and height difference, no one would be able to tell the difference! It was almost time to go, and I was getting nervous, this day would definitely be one of the more interesting ones ive ever had.
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If anyone wants to edit my grammar/spelling feel free to do so, at the moment its the cliche waking up "OMG im a girl" etc etc, but I think it'll get better (XD yes its my dream in story form)
....in this dream I was running, I couldn't see anything around me except for a gray floor, and lights that illuminated my path. Everything else was surrounded by shadows and my hair kept hitting me in the face. Thats not possible though, I keep my hair pretty short, and while it was longer than most boys hair, it wouldn't be long enough to hit me in the face. What was going on here? I wasn't even running as fast as I normally could, and despite anything I tried I couldn't looked down, or to the side, and I couldn't stop. Was this a dream? Am I dead? Whats going on here?!
I woke up in a cold sweat, and looked around the room its still dark out, and my computer is gone. The light that usually illuminates my my room is gone, and my A/C isn't running so im really hot. My first and only thought is that the electricity must've went out again, I rolled over and slowly drifted back to sleep ignoring my uncomfortableness passing it off as heat from no A/C. The dream resumed, but things were alot brighter, I notice several faces I haven't seen in years Krystal Remshaw is the one that sticks out the most, she's beautiful. She stands about 5'2 at least the last time I saw her in 9th grade. Her face is beautiful with gorgeous green eyes, long brown hair that goes to her shoulders, its silky. Why is her face so clear though, shouldn't it be blurry after his all time? I dont know whats going on, thats when I hear a bang on my wall followed by the sound of my mom's voice.
"Alright! Time to get up and get ready for school" she bangs on the wall again, and I hear her walk away. I groan confused mainly because I haven't been in school for at least 2 years, I shrug it off and sit up scratching the back of my head, my hair feels a bit smoother, longer even, but I dont pay any attention to it really. I haven't had a haircut in a while. I spin a bit, hang my legs off the bed, and get up. I almost stumble as something feels off almost like bed is taller than usual. My eyes are still blurry and I cant really see straight thanks to it, so I forget about that. My pants hanging off my hips and I have to hold them up, I dont pay much attention to it though. I have been losing a bit of weight lately, with weight lifting and exercises, the fact I have to hold my pants up is kind of nice for my ego.
I stumble out of my room, and into the bathroom, I nearly trip over discarded clothing that someone left out. I walk forward a bit and turn, where I take my normal relaxed position right in front of the toilet. I release my hold on my pants and boxers and they fall to the floor, I reach down between my legs only to get a palm full of air. I blink confused and scramble around for it, until I realize the fact that IT's gone. I let out a scream, its oddly high-pitched, the pitch of it could wake the dead if it was possible.
I was a girl, somehow, I had become a girl my member was gone. What else could I do in this situation, despite how I hard I was trying, what with the higher emotions I currently had thanks to this body, and the fact that I just lost my malehood, I broke down crying. My mom came running from the scream only to see a crying girl there in her son's clothes, pants and underwear around her ankles, the clothes obviously big for her. My mom looked different though, younger, healthier. I looked backwards into the mirror, and I couldn't believe what I saw, staring back at me was a cute girl with long brown hair, sparkling brown eyes, small A cup breasts, wearing a black t-shirt with a skull on the chest, tears rolling down her face. She looked almost like I would if I had been born a girl, just younger.
"Oh no.. Oh no no no!" I had somehow become a girl and to make things even worse I had somehow been sent back about 6 years. I was 15 years old, and female.. with no clue on how it happened. My mom looked even more shocked than me, and why wouldn't she be? Seeing a strange girl half-nude crying in your bathroom isn't something that happens everyday. I stared at my mom and tried to form words, but none would come, we both just stood there staring at each other, her look was shock, my look was a mixture of fear, shock, and confusion.
"H-Hi Mom..." I managed to squeak out, my voice was so quiet, it was even quieter than Krystal's was way back then. My mom's look of shock turned to confusion..
".....Who are you?" she managed to ask me, despite everything she was seeing.
"Its me, James... I think, I dont look like myself.. obviously" I managed to squeak out again, my horrible sense of explaining anything once again making itself painfully obvious.
My mom didn't say much "You cant miss school because of this you know. Unfortunately, you've missed enough days, whether your a girl or not, you have to get dressed, dont worry ill take you today, we'll sort this out I promise" and with that she walked away, I couldn't believe it, I had to go to school like this too! Just great, as if I wasn't having a hard enough time with girls as it was. I pulled my pants up and stumbled back to my room. I sit on my bed, looking around my room for at least 10 minutes, nothing had changed, it was still as messy as ever, my clothes thrown all over the room, my SNES plugged into my TV, the Final Fantasy IV cartridge in it. I haven't played that game in about 5 years, it was funny seeing it again.
I figured id put it off enough, and kicked off my clothes, I didn't wanna see myself naked not yet. I still wasn't ready to accept this, maybe it was all a dream either way I had to get dressed so I slid on a fresh pair of boxers, an old pair of jeans, tossed on a new black t-shirt, and threw on an old sweater. I figured this would at least hide I was a girl to those at a distance. I grabbed an old cap and in cliche fashion, tucked my hair under it, and smiled. There! Despite my cuter face, weight loss, and height difference, no one would be able to tell the difference! It was almost time to go, and I was getting nervous, this day would definitely be one of the more interesting ones ive ever had.
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If anyone wants to edit my grammar/spelling feel free to do so, at the moment its the cliche waking up "OMG im a girl" etc etc, but I think it'll get better (XD yes its my dream in story form)
Lets go Shopping" she's gonna have a hard time accepting it, but if she doesn't go to school then what happens instead of her mom telling her to get dressed for school so casually..
Other than that, though, you're looking good. I'd have to go through in greater detail to find little spelling and grammatical errors; nothing jumped out at me as truly glaring, so I'd have to pull out my fine-toothed comb. Otherwise, this seems to be an intriguing premise. You could do a lot with it.