Mecchen House - Complete First Book Online
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Mecchen House - Complete First Book Online
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Posted: Sun Sep 10, 2006 5:58 pmPosted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:10 pmUpdated, as you can see.
Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:48 pmKatsumi is really freaky.... Makes you wonder what deep-rooted psychological trauma caused that kind of extreme hatred... Eiter that, or what kind of parents/people she was around when she was younger than made her feel that way...
Posted: Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:36 pmKatsumi is my favorite due to her intensity and history.
Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:13 pmMy favorite is Nana. For her mysteriousness/crypticness.
Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 2:04 amI get to write lots with her next chapter ^_^ She and Reiko are cooking breakfast.
Posted: Tue Sep 26, 2006 5:39 pm... Freaky. Never thought it would go that way. 
I think I'll hide from Katsumi. No, really. She's scary! *hides*
I think I'll hide from Katsumi. No, really. She's scary! *hides*
Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:05 pmUpdated once more and Chapter Seven is upcoming. I'm roughly halfway through text-wise. My novel is officially novel-length now ^_^V 50,000+ words.
Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 8:56 pmUh.. are we and how do we look at said chapters?
Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:21 pmClick the links.
Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:11 pmThey should put Katsumi in a mental institution.. me too!
Doncha get cramped fingers?
Doncha get cramped fingers?
Posted: Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:19 pmCause of what? ^^ It only averages out to around 450 words a day.
But yeah on Katsumi although I do really like her. She's just a tad overzealous.
But yeah on Katsumi although I do really like her. She's just a tad overzealous.
Posted: Mon Oct 16, 2006 5:22 pmHow many chapters do you think this whole thing is made of?
I'm totally engrossed with this. (eeegh..I can't stop myself.)
I'm totally engrossed with this. (eeegh..I can't stop myself.)
Posted: Tue Oct 17, 2006 3:37 amMy best guess is right around 30 or so. We'll see though. I was thinking of doing chapters from other perspectives but I decided against it. I might do it later but I like the cloudy-feeling of a very limited perspective.
Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:39 pmExcellent. Just... excellent. Addictive like crack and highly original. This is a conglomeration of some of my favorite themes (inter-world travel, TG, quirky characters...), and makes a very great read. I'll admit that I passed over it the first few times I saw it because I thought it was just a story about crazy people in a house. In retrospect, reading the story before the comments probably would have helped. >_>
You're an excellent author, with only one or two recurring grammatical errors. The most noticable would be one involving characters performing an action before speaking. I can't explain this in highly technical terms, but I'll try to get the point across. Let's take the following sentence:
[quote="Mecchen House"]He flicked his hand, “Well, I’ve had enough of riddles and other stuff like that. You say you want to help…then help.â€
You're an excellent author, with only one or two recurring grammatical errors. The most noticable would be one involving characters performing an action before speaking. I can't explain this in highly technical terms, but I'll try to get the point across. Let's take the following sentence:
[quote="Mecchen House"]He flicked his hand, “Well, I’ve had enough of riddles and other stuff like that. You say you want to help…then help.â€