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Postby Kumi-chan » Thu Apr 21, 2005 2:30 pm

*nods* Actaully I thought the idea behind the second one was cool. Using 2 different stories in the same caption. 2 different dimensions that is a good idea. But both stories seemed rushed. The third one was great! As was the first.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Thu Apr 21, 2005 3:00 pm

Okay, now that I'm more awake... In number two, I liked reality #2 despite it being confusing. In the first reality, I guess I expected there to be a crowd, or some sign that Brad was actually on the volleyball team (because why would she have to find out her team won somewhere other than being at the game?). But the setting was an office/room, which seemed more appropriate for seeing a Dr. Norton. In which case, Wade seemed to be insensitive about his friend's predicament. Though, I have no idea what doctors and magic normally have to do with each other, and a bouquet that's enchanted or something? O.o So, yeah, a bit confusing, but better setting... That's what I think, anyway. <.<
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Postby alebann » Fri Apr 22, 2005 12:49 am

Well, nobody bats 1.000. I probably should have went back and erased some of the stuff in the two-for-one caption. I almost did, but was trying to do other stuff as well. In any case, I hope these three are better.

they're floatation devices... for safety...
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... ogiejp.jpg

College admissions are getting really cutt-throat...
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/alebann/MITjp.jpg

I like the caribbean.
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... turnjp.jpg

That's all for now. I may take the weekend off from posting captions to build the buffer back up...
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Fri Apr 22, 2005 1:16 am

Sorry for what I said about the second one in the last post, but I focused on it since I did the others last time. ^_^; Sorry. *Bows head*

As for these three... In the first one, I'm not sure if Molly is off-image or in-image. Either way, Brandon got over being stuck pretty fast. ^_^; The second one was great! And, might I add, I know a Cindy Jackson. ^o^ At first, the third confused me a bit, but I just re-read it before writing this sentence, and I think it's a good one. (V)~.^
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Postby Beyond » Fri Apr 22, 2005 9:16 am

I love the third one!

all of them are great.
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Postby Sakraida82 » Fri Apr 22, 2005 11:49 am

Yes you are the queen of captions.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Fri Apr 22, 2005 2:18 pm

Very nice work. The third one is the best once you read it a few times. The second one is cool. I think about finding an amulet like that sometimes. The first one was interesting but I just didn't like it as much as the others.
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Postby alebann » Fri Apr 22, 2005 9:29 pm

I've got a poker game tonight, so I'm posting early.

They don't offer those classes at my university
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What was the name of that liqueur?
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I'll probably get some more out on Monday. Thanks again for reading.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Fri Apr 22, 2005 9:45 pm

Hrm... I thought two and three were good. I'm not really sure about the first one.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Fri Apr 22, 2005 10:39 pm

The first one kind of reminds me of maybe being a class at MSF high. The second one was good but the third one was great. I'm not normally one for mental TFs but I like it for that one.
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Postby Sakraida82 » Sat Apr 23, 2005 10:23 am

MM I liked the second one best.
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Postby alebann » Tue Apr 26, 2005 12:34 am

Hiatus = over. New pics = here. I love math.
We need to set something like this up
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... honejp.jpg

I have some ideas as to what it'd sound like
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Ah, sweet mementos.
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I'll be back tomorrow with more, enjoy.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Tue Apr 26, 2005 12:52 am

Very nice work. I like the first to a lot. Good work on all of them.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Tue Apr 26, 2005 1:40 am

I like the first two. ^_^ Did you arrange those photographs in the third one? If so, extra kudos for that one. XD
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Postby alebann » Tue Apr 26, 2005 1:52 am

For the record, I found the picture of the polaroids as is.
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