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Postby Duck » Thu May 05, 2005 7:04 pm

I like first and third... they were just awesome..

second didn't tickle my fancy as much...
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Postby alebann » Fri May 06, 2005 1:33 am

Wanted to throw these last couple out there. I'm kind of squeezing this post in between going out with some buddies and studying for a final. as such, no explanations, just links.

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... reepjp.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... rowdjp.jpg

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... selfjp.jpg

That makes 61 posted captions.
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Postby opus` » Fri May 06, 2005 1:59 am

Number three!

Awesome stuff, alebann ^^
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Postby Kumi-chan » Fri May 06, 2005 10:07 am

Wow! The third one is great. *nods sagely* hmm...I also liked the first one it was very good. *smiles*
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Postby Ninian » Fri May 06, 2005 11:16 am

^^;

*blush, flattered* (I'm assuming number 2 are what I think they are*

EDIT: Oh, and Number 3 is definitely going into my personal Hall of Fame. Grand slam, Ally.
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Postby Lioconvoy » Fri May 06, 2005 2:37 pm

Not bad, don't care for the theme of the later two. Still pretty well put together and not too long. I've never been a fan of long captions.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Fri May 06, 2005 3:11 pm

That's because you're long in the tooth, Lio. ;p

Well, can't say I care for brainwashing/hypnotism and all that, but the first was alright. The second was interesting, but I just wanted to point out that the image shows them on a bus rather than on a street. ^_^; Or, at least somewhere where there are two vertical bars. <.<; Number three... I have mixed feelings about, personally, but it's done good as far as technicality goes.
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Postby Lioconvoy » Fri May 06, 2005 9:30 pm

After having gone through all the captions you've posted I really like the following:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... ternjp.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... honejp.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... rushjp.jpg
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/alebann/barjp.jpg

This one, the text and the text background are a bit too simular:
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... uhohjp.jpg

I've always had a hard time picking apropriate font colors myself, but you don't seem to do it quite as often as I do.
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Postby Sakraida82 » Sat May 07, 2005 12:21 am

Interesting.
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Postby alebann » Mon May 09, 2005 12:54 am

Well, I didn't think I'd have any done, but here are four more to make it 65 captions, a nice, even number. The odds of me having any new ones tomorrow are low, but the odds of me posting about something is high...

I liked the general idea involving this picture but the first attempt ended too darkly
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... dutyjp.jpg

This one is lighter, and Tretiak is the name of a famous Russian goalie...
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... uty2jp.jpg

This one... Probably needed a rewrite
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... tripjp.jpg

For those of you who didn't like brainwashing, I apologize for this one
http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y137/a ... liskjp.jpg

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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Mon May 09, 2005 1:12 am

Hrm... Actually, I liked the brainwashing most, even though I don't personally favor it. The only thing is... Why would flowers be left on the change of clothing and not have them explained? ^_^; Kind of gives me the feeling the girls were there to give respect to a girl that had died there. Or something.
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Postby Lioconvoy » Mon May 09, 2005 2:54 am

Hmm, first one has a noticible gramatical error, but it isn't that bad.

If I seem too critical it's cuase i really like your stuff.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Mon May 09, 2005 4:56 pm

Very nice work on all of them. I'm not the biggest fan of mental TFs but I do enjoy them from time to time.
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Postby Duck » Mon May 09, 2005 6:29 pm

The second and first ones are my favorites outta this bunch... the third is good to. just i wish i saw her.
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Postby Lady Sakura » Mon May 09, 2005 6:58 pm

Heh, I'm trying to get these on the server, but Alebann is so quick in making them... lol
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