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Rain Dance's Captions

Postby Rain Dance » Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:53 pm

Well, after a year-and-a-half of lurking and reading other people's work, I finally decided to post some my own captions. I suspect they will be somewhat different from the norm on this forum, given my attempts to keep them as quick and concise as possible, though at times I do get a bit tangential(It Says So in the Handbook, for instance).

Without further adieu, the first ten captions off of my intellectual assembly line:

The Perils of Confrontation -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc1.jpg
Me and My Big Mouth -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc2.jpg
Buyer's Remorse -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc3.jpg
Don't Panaic(Just Yet) -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc5.jpg
Specificity Helps -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc6.jpg
Of Idioms and Fanartists -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc7.jpg
The First Spin of the Wheel of Morality -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc8.jpg
It Say So in the Handbook -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc9.jpg
Don't Cut the Red Wire! Or Any of Them, For That Matter -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc10.jpg
A Second Spin of the Wheel of Morality -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc11.jpg

I'm constantly looking for feedback, opinions, and constructive criticism to help me improve my writing. So, let me have it should you have any of those. Or if you spot spelling mistakes. Lemme know about them too.

[Edit: It also occurs to me that I probably made a very bad word choice in the title, as I suspect ye old regulars shall break out the TG Ray Guns and assorted other gimmicks to convert me to the Sisterhood.]
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Postby Kumi-chan » Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:28 am

Better nice ones. They are pretty good.
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Postby Josie » Sun Sep 18, 2005 6:55 am

Very nice captions. XD The Wheel of Morality, very funny
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:42 pm

Yes; short, sweet, and good. No spelling errors that I can remember spotting... The only thing I find only a tad bit off, is just a technicality: it's a little straining to see the dark blue words on blue with it blotchy (or whatever the technical name for it is). But I'm assuming that you're using some kind of paint program? Otherwise everything seems fine, and your content good. ^_^
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Postby Meru » Sun Sep 18, 2005 5:45 pm

Pretty awesome captions, compared to some that have been on here.
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Postby Sasha » Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:33 pm

not bad and nice animanics refrance with the weel ones ^^
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Postby Rain Dance » Sat Dec 10, 2005 4:40 am

Murphy's Laws of the RPC: Defense Contractors Suck -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc12.jpg
RPC Files: CYOA -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc13.jpg
RPC Files: Always Look on the Bright Side -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc14.jpg
The Wishgranter: Ingrates -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc15.jpg
RPC Files: A Moment in Time -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc16.jpg

Updates should start coming a bit quicker than this three-month delay. Sometimes, though, the creative juices just go south and you can't regain them to save your soul(or, in these parts, your gender).
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Postby Sierra_Rune » Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:36 am

Great ones... I really like them. Quite innovative.
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Postby Mistress Guendolen » Sat Dec 10, 2005 12:32 pm

Good work, overall. I especially liked the narrative tone in the "don't panic" one.
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Postby Chibi MitchellTF » Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:21 pm

I like 'em, I just wish they had better 'names', for easier filing...
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