Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Sep 10, 2006 5:58 pm

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by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:10 pm

Updated, as you can see.

by **Meru** » Sun Sep 24, 2006 7:48 pm

Katsumi is really freaky.... Makes you wonder what deep-rooted psychological trauma caused that kind of extreme hatred... Eiter that, or what kind of parents/people she was around when she was younger than made her feel that way...

by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Sep 24, 2006 10:36 pm

Katsumi is my favorite due to her intensity and history.

by **Meru** » Mon Sep 25, 2006 9:13 pm

My favorite is Nana. For her mysteriousness/crypticness.

by **Cutey Kerina** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 2:04 am

I get to write lots with her next chapter ^_^ She and Reiko are cooking breakfast.

by **AnimaVex** » Tue Sep 26, 2006 5:39 pm

... Freaky. Never thought it would go that way.

I think I'll hide from Katsumi. No, really. She's scary! *hides*

by **Cutey Kerina** » Thu Oct 12, 2006 5:05 pm

Updated once more and Chapter Seven is upcoming. I'm roughly halfway through text-wise. My novel is officially novel-length now ^_^V 50,000+ words.

by **P-tan** » Thu Oct 12, 2006 8:56 pm

Uh.. are we and how do we look at said chapters?

by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 2:21 pm

Click the links.

by **P-tan** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 8:11 pm

They should put Katsumi in a mental institution.. me too!

Doncha get cramped fingers?

by **Cutey Kerina** » Sun Oct 15, 2006 11:19 pm

Cause of what? ^^ It only averages out to around 450 words a day.

But yeah on Katsumi although I do really like her. She's just a tad overzealous.

by **P-tan** » Mon Oct 16, 2006 5:22 pm

How many chapters do you think this whole thing is made of?

I'm totally engrossed with this. (eeegh..I can't stop myself.)

by **Cutey Kerina** » Tue Oct 17, 2006 3:37 am

My best guess is right around 30 or so. We'll see though. I was thinking of doing chapters from other perspectives but I decided against it. I might do it later but I like the cloudy-feeling of a very limited perspective.

by **Kyunji** » Fri Oct 20, 2006 8:39 pm

Excellent. Just... excellent. Addictive like crack and highly original. This is a conglomeration of some of my favorite themes (inter-world travel, TG, quirky characters...), and makes a very great read. I'll admit that I passed over it the first few times I saw it because I thought it was just a story about crazy people in a house. In retrospect, reading the story before the comments probably would have helped. >_>

You're an excellent author, with only one or two recurring grammatical errors. The most noticable would be one involving characters performing an action before speaking. I can't explain this in highly technical terms, but I'll try to get the point across. Let's take the following sentence:

[quote="Mecchen House"]He flicked his hand, â€œWell, Iâ€™ve had enough of riddles and other stuff like that. You say you want to helpâ€¦then help.â€

Magical Sailor Fuku

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