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The ninja one is nice, but..I generally DO like those kinda things.
Katty wrote:Wow. First, grats for finding that pic. It almost screamed to be captioned. Anyway, I never thought I would see him in an emotional state. Period. =^-^=
Terri Violet Tsukino wrote:In regards to the ninja one...I was going for "playfully dark" rather than "despairingly dark..." though I may not have entirely succeded in that.^^;; I think that maybe I should have made it more clear that the transformee was happy in the end, and developed the person who transformed her in such a way that he had some sort of redeeming quality. But then again, it may not have made much difference, as one could argue that just because someone is happy after being mind altered, it doesn't mean it's not scary that they've been mind altered in the first place.^^;; And that's a perfectly understandable view.^^ I think the next time I try a mental alteration cap, I'll try to make it more focused on cuteness than sexuality, and try to make both the victim and the culprit more sympathetic, in an experiment to see if I can entertain a wider range of people, and develop my writing style.
Chibi MitchellTF wrote:*nods* I'm glad that the objections helped you improve, and not simply discouraged you. I just have some....personal...issues with things that come perilously close to...
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