by Meru » Sat May 05, 2007 9:44 pm
(One thing you missed is that it's 10pm. I doubt classes would be running this late, unless you are going to night classes. Another tip is to try to make your posts a bit more natural... Like, what would you say/think in this situation, if you were this character, rather than just saying something that seems stereotypical or robotic. Ex: Instead of "Okay so what I found was an empty vial. I guess I will go exploring some more." "I remember hearing about some strange potions today.. If this is one of them, maybe there are more nearby!" Or something like that. And if you want a list of the potions and their effects, including the number remaining/found, you can contact me on AIM or MSN, and I'll send you a notepad I made of it all.)
"We're just... Going to meet up with some of our friends, that's all.. You don't need to follow us, just give us the potion and we'll be on our way." Allen says, trying to get the potion one way or another..
"Taking advantage of male pattern baldness is about as low as you can get! I won't allow it!"-Croix from La Pucelle