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Postby Nikki » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:17 pm

Okay I'll be blunt. You need more variety in these captions. Every one follows the pretty much the same story. The transformed guy falls in love with his best friend. It gets boring to keep reading it. So try to change it up once in a while
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Postby Sasha » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:18 pm

ya they are good mario
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Postby MarioDS01 » Sun Aug 05, 2007 9:22 pm

Riana:
Yeah, I guess you are right. But I guess I like doing that a little much. I do have some other stories as well. Maybe I'll try some more humoreos ones, maybe.

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Glad you like my TG captions.
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Postby Nikki » Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:31 am

I have one thing to say. Spider-pig Spider Pig does whatever a Spider Pig does.
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Postby Rose » Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:33 am

Well can you do one about Body swaping May and brock.Its a eazy picture
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Postby MarioDS01 » Tue Aug 07, 2007 11:33 am

Riana Aninikkou wrote:I have one thing to say. Spider-pig Spider Pig does whatever a Spider Pig does.


LOL!!!! Good comeback Riana! I guess you saw The Simpsons movie as well. I loved it!!! I hope you loved all my other latest TG captions as well!
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Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Tue Aug 07, 2007 4:00 pm

A very minor problem I saw in a couple of your captions seems to be your grammar. I think one of the rules of English that actually isn't messed up horribly is the one about other people and yourself so that it comes out like "My friends and I" instead of "I and my friends" or "My friends and me."

Just wanted to help out a little bit! Keep up the good work!
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Postby Lucky » Wed Aug 08, 2007 10:50 am

Aires Drake wrote:A very minor problem I saw in a couple of your captions seems to be your grammar. I think one of the rules of English that actually isn't messed up horribly is the one about other people and yourself so that it comes out like "My friends and I" instead of "I and my friends" or "My friends and me."

Just wanted to help out a little bit! Keep up the good work!



I always ignore that rule, becaues I don't talk like that, so why should I word my writeing the same way?

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Postby Tiffany Grimm » Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:15 pm

Well, thanks for the Ash TG caption, it was really cool!
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Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Wed Aug 08, 2007 8:06 pm

Lucky wrote:I always ignore that rule, becaues I don't talk like that, so why should I word my writeing the same way?

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Eh, My dad's a lawyer so that should explain things right there....

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Postby MarioDS01 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 2:04 pm

4 more TG caption images to look at.

I wanted to let you guys know something. I now know not to do any unauthorized sequels to any TG captions, so I will seek permission from you guys.

I wanted everyone to know you guys are more then welcome to make sequels out of any of my TG captions in this topic. Or any stories based on any tg captions like a fanfiction. Just make sure to maybe let me know what you are doing and give me a small amount of credit to the original one the sequel is based on.

Oh, if any of you guys want sequels to your captions and want me to do it, then send whatever TG captions in and I'll see what I can do.

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w74/ ... ndMika.jpg

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w74/ ... riends.jpg

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w74/ ... Sister.jpg

http://i173.photobucket.com/albums/w74/ ... wkward.jpg
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Mon Aug 20, 2007 2:14 pm

I just wanted to remind you that you should have warnings with any link with content that's more than what's acceptable, such as the one that shows some areola and possibly the one with pregnant Ruto.

Also, I managed to find some of the artists whose artwork you used, so... No excuse to not ask for permission to use them now. :O

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