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My first captions

Postby Rose » Sat Aug 25, 2007 3:29 pm

I have no idea if im gonna finish this


http://img524.imageshack.us/img524/5742/1152213980612bh1sw0.jpg

I only used Paint because of the fact i have no money for a photoediter and I cant use Gimp...Can anyone help me?
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Postby Rowan » Sat Aug 25, 2007 6:08 pm

Pretty good start ^__^

If you're using Paint, to make boxes, just use the shape making tool.

Select, say, the thing that looks like a box. Then pick the specific one that is filled in (Either with a border or without).

Pick your border color with Left Click and your Interior Color with Right Click.

Then click and drag to make a nice box (or circle or whatever) easily.
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Postby Katty » Sat Aug 25, 2007 7:22 pm

I know nothing about Paint, but I know captions. Once you get use to it, you will be fine. This first one was a nice little one for your first. Good job.
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Postby Sasha » Sat Aug 25, 2007 7:25 pm

ya when i make captions i use paint also.
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Postby Haylie » Sat Aug 25, 2007 8:03 pm

Hey, that ain't bad. Work on your grammar and you'll have it made.

I usually use Paint too, 'cause I can't pay for Photoshop and I'm ignorant in the ways of Gimp myself, so sorry, can't help, or else I would. That's a good start, though, and with the cookie thing, you could have your own style or series. Keep it up.
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Postby UDDCommander » Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:04 am

Good Work, just a little grammar check needed.

I too use Paint, and though I'm trying to learn GIMP I still am not to the point where I can use it for captions so don't stress about which program you use.
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Postby Rose » Sun Aug 26, 2007 9:45 am

Thanks for the advice...

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Postby Lucky » Sun Aug 26, 2007 10:33 am

Yellow doesn't show up well over the picher. Still a good caption. I sujest add the border to the side. Also if your vertion of MS paint has it, save it as a PNG. In some vertions you can even add ".PNG" to the end and it'll save it correctly. (In others it doesn't and save it gif. O___o )
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Postby Rowan » Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:08 pm

Good caption but the text doesn't really show up. You can adjust the size of it and it'll add a white blank section to the side or bottom where you can add text. To increase my font size in mine I actually look screenshots of Wordpad and pasted it in.
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Postby Katty » Sun Aug 26, 2007 1:15 pm

I as well would add a back section then put the text on that. But if you did not want a back section, then I Suggest just changeing the text color. Yellow is a bit hard to read on this pic.

As for the caption itself, it was nice. I liked how you had him / her fighting with pronouns. =^-^=
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Postby Haylie » Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:51 pm

Make the text a different color, first off. It's hard to read.
Next, there are less grammar errors, good work.

Other than that, it's a great cap. Keep it up.
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Postby Rose » Sun Aug 26, 2007 5:52 pm

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Postby Haylie » Sun Aug 26, 2007 6:27 pm

Oooh, ominous. I like it. *Applauds* Grammar's improving, that's good. Very interesting captions so far. Better than me, for sure.
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Postby Tala » Sun Aug 26, 2007 6:30 pm

I love them. Expecily the Saskue one.
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Postby Katty » Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:02 am

That was a nice Naruto one. Only thing this time is just make it bigger. Other then that, it is a great caption. Good job.
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