by Ninian » Fri Sep 14, 2007 4:48 am
Hm... Musa, I have to admit I'm conflicted. Not by any fault of your own, oh no. It's just hm... how to put it. I like captions because they inspire certain, uh, feelings and consequential activities from me. They're fetish fantasies ultimately for me, and I tend to rate or criticize based on how much they can move me emotionally (... and physically). So given that you specialize in FtM, a large element is missing for me.
Which is a shame because the last ones you've done are right up my alley in themes and so on. That last one would be a coveted part of my caption collection. I'll admit I was tempted to mentally reconstruct that fantasy, just with genders switched around -- that's says a lot in your favor. You also switch up structures, which is crucial (i.e. not always starting the caption with introducing the character or their friend, your latest trying second person, etc.). It's a shame your older stuff isn't available anymore so I could be more thorough. It's also a shame to me that given how many physical males or people generally attracted to girls here, you don't have the audience I feel you deserve.