Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

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Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lanzerus » Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:26 am

I know the idea has been used several times before, two guys find a shady video game, play it lose they lose something important to them.

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but hey, it was a one shot kinda thing and i thought why not it doesn't seem that hard
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Haylie » Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:40 pm

The idea has indeed been used many times. Video game-wise, at least. But it's one of those ideas that never gets old, y'know? Nonetheless, I thought it was pretty good for a first cap. Short 'n' sweet, that's how most like it. I also like the looks on their faces. Good work.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby UDDCommander » Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:09 pm

Hay-chan wrote:The idea has indeed been used many times. Video game-wise, at least. But it's one of those ideas that never gets old, y'know?



True, the idea never gets old and it was very well done for a first cap, keep it up.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lanzerus » Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:03 am

i toyed around with font colours! ^_^

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z184 ... /lolol.jpg
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby jimmyinwhite » Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:40 am

both are great captions. can you do more?
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Miyukicl » Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:33 am

^^ yes really nice captions!!!
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Haylie » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:20 pm

Not a bad concept, the second one. I'm sorry, but I have to point out the spelling and capitalization errors, though. I'm a stickler for such things, I'm sorry. It just bugs the crap out of me when people don't spell things or capitalize them properly. Otherwise, it's a pretty good caption. I could never do the separate-color-font thing.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lanzerus » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:21 pm

you just have to understand how to use paint which unfortunately has no spelling grammar check so its kinda hard for me to get everything... WEWT FOR DYSLEXIA!
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Haylie » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:25 pm

Right, sorry.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lanzerus » Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:36 pm

Its okay, my doctor says that using the computer as often as i do its actually helping my condition ^-^
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Haylie » Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:03 pm

Oh, good. I hope it gets better. My folks actually think being on the computer and video games is bad for me. HA! Showed them, ya did!
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lucky » Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:48 pm

Your quility of captions are getting better. Keep up the hard work.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Hira Kanaki » Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:15 pm

Yes, the quality of your captions are getting better, also for the spelling and grammar check I use word sometimes to write out the script of a caption, then paste it onto the caption when it's done.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby Lanzerus » Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:47 pm

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z184 ... OTCOOL.jpg

one more just before bed, also thanks for the word idea, Im sure it will help alot.
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Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

Postby jimmyinwhite » Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:15 am

They keep getting better and better.
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