"When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

[Placeholder]

Moderator: Mistress Guendolen

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby AshK » Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:08 pm

Garath the Shadowshifter wrote:"Cookie!? Cookie!? How will a cookie Hel- Ooo! Peanut Butter!" The girl said as she tried to grab one. Unfortantly being a ghost she couldn't, and began to cry again.

"I can't even eat COOKIES!" She screamed. Of course, no one but Aaron could hear her still...


*11-Year-Old Female Aaron giggles a bit.*

"I'm sorry once again sweetie calm down. Here you go." 11-Year-Old Female Aaron said as she handed the Peanut Butter Cookie to the Astral Form Girl. SInce He/She was the only one that could touch her, she mangaed to take the cookie from her body. Since she got it from Aaron-Chan she should be able to put it in her mouth.

"Feel better now Sweetie?" 11-Year-Old Female Aaron said to the Ghostly girl.

OOC: I was given permission by Garath to do this just so you know.
Last edited by AshK on Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
AshK
Postimus Maximus
Postimus Maximus
 
Posts: 15504
Joined: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:10 pm
Location: Peoria, IL

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Zoey » Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:15 pm

As I made my way out of the arcade I decide to move on to the big rides. Unfortunately almost all of them had huge lines.
I decided to buy some stuff to bring back home. So I went to they stores they had and guess what? More Lines!!! I went on a small roller coaster ride they added. The line seemed short, but it almost never moved! so I waited, and waited... and waited. After giving up I see this teacher just cut infront on the whole line and gets into the ride. I was just so pissed!

I stomped to the nearest bench. I couldn't belive they would let teachers cut infront of the line while all the rest of us students had to wait! I took out the cookie I had and took a big bite out of it. "I wish I was a teacher! Then I wouldn't have to wait in the lines."
"Let me confirm, your shelter shield is activated?"
"What are you planning?!"
"Your shelter is secure, is it?"
"Of course it is! Just see for yourself how powerless you are!"
"...Roger that."
User avatar
Zoey
MSF Addict
MSF Addict
 
Posts: 10103
Joined: Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:42 pm
Location: In a tree top somewhere

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Garath the Shadowshifter » Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:24 pm

(Hmmm.

Ok I know you are going to hate me for this. But...

A: Aaron shouldn't really know the cookies caused the magic. Like I mentioned in the PM. I'm guessing you went looking for the cookies to calm her down, but it doesn't explain why you'd wish before eating one.

B: Even so The way you are wishing is very poor. Try to be a bit more creative.

I'll give you an example: I'll take control of your character for a minute and make a post of how I think things should be done:

If this is ok with you. Let me know. For now Let's omit that last post as well. I'm sorry about this.)
This Party's Getting CRAZY! LET'S ROCK!!
Image
User avatar
Garath the Shadowshifter
Active MSFer
Active MSFer
 
Posts: 897
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2004 6:27 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby AshK » Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:39 pm

OOC: Go ahead Garath. If i derailed the RP, I'm sorry.
User avatar
AshK
Postimus Maximus
Postimus Maximus
 
Posts: 15504
Joined: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:10 pm
Location: Peoria, IL

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Garath the Shadowshifter » Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:58 pm

"I wish I was a teacher! Then I wouldn't have to wait in the lines."


At least that is what he had intended to say. While he sat there eating the cookie he thought of saying that. He even opened his mouth TO say that. Except for some odd reason, he said this instead:

"I wish I had a completely different life, one that was less hectic and quite different than my current one."

Of course he couldn't know that the cookie he had eaten was the cause of this. It's magic being the one to cause the user to repeat the last wish spoken. Unfortantly for them, all the cookies had been connected. They knew what had been wished.

Now another thing that was odd was he had eaten a Chocolate Chip cookie. The Princaple had eaten one and gotten HIS wish, so why was Luke repeating the last wish made when he ate the same cookie?

Well they'd not know this, but the trip through the Chaos Sphere that sent them here had really messed up the magical properties in the cookies. Any cookie no matter what flavor could grant a wish in any six ways. It was completely up to chance which one.

Luke didn't seem to be so lucky. Or was he?

His hair completely changed colors and styles. Glasses suddenly appeared upon his face. His body rearranging into a shapely womenly body.

His cloathing became a white shirt that was open to reveal a rather form fitting orange top, that showed off his new 'cleavage' quite nicely. Her pants became a brown shirt, and her shoes, while remaining the same color, became women dress shoes. (Not high heels. I hate high heels)

Of course non of that compaired to the fact (s)he suddenly sprouted cat ears and a tail...

He had become a teacher after all. The teacher known as Shizuka-senshi who worked at the Private school. Though in reality she was a monster hiding in the world of humans.

Of course the wish that had effected Luke earlier hadn't canciled out. So even though he was now a 'cat' women. SHE was still perfect at teaching, and almost anything else she did.

She was of course, also the most popular teacher with both staff and students.

In fact a large group of the private school kids upon seeing her, all rushed to her at once with shouts of "Shizuka-senshi! Shizuka-Senshi! Ride on the rides with us! Come with us!"

(I actually have a program that randomizes the cookies and their effects. >:D Could have mentioned that earlier, but I like to gradually reveal my surpises as the game runs along.

As for what Luke looks like now:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b84/videomaster21XX/MSF%20Avatar%20pics/ShizukaNekonome.jpg
Last edited by Garath the Shadowshifter on Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:12 am, edited 3 times in total.
This Party's Getting CRAZY! LET'S ROCK!!
Image
User avatar
Garath the Shadowshifter
Active MSFer
Active MSFer
 
Posts: 897
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2004 6:27 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Mystic Mina » Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:13 pm

"Ah, Rhia! I'm back! And I've got the list of ph- BLARGH!"

Poor Clark found himself stampeded by a group of private school students that seemed to have come out of nowhere. Today just wasn't his day....

"What the? Where did that come from?" Clark managed to splutter out as he picked himself off of the ground and tried his best to clean himself up. His clothes were spotted with dirty footprints, and the left lens of his glasses had a slight crack on it. "Wait.... I saw a few of my kids in that group! Hey! COME BACK HERE!"
User avatar
Mystic Mina
Derailer (Just Kidding)
Derailer (Just Kidding)
 
Posts: 2532
Joined: Tue Sep 27, 2005 1:01 am
Location: Around the corner to the left.

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Mistress Guendolen » Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:20 pm

"I'll head them off at the pass!" Rhiannon's years in playing field hockey meant she was distinctly swifter on her feet than Clark. She darted around to the side, trying to pull herself up close to their midst. "Hey! Hey, get back here right now! Stop!" They'd not just run off on Clark, but trampled him to boot. Now she was definitely ticked off....
Adding to the magical kitten girl army...one huggle at a time mraa
User avatar
Mistress Guendolen
Senpai
Senpai
 
Posts: 10094
Joined: Fri May 13, 2005 12:55 pm
Location: My own mental universe of animated otherworldly fantasy

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Shadowmaster » Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:22 pm

Jamie finally wandered over to the arcade after getting distracted by a number of the sights around the park. He looked around the arcade a bit, trying to decide which machine to try first.
I am a ninja, zam.
User avatar
Shadowmaster
Total Nutcase
Total Nutcase
 
Posts: 4272
Joined: Thu Mar 23, 2006 4:29 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Zoey » Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:50 pm

Suddenly I heared a bunch of kids shout out some name. "Shizuka-senshi". They all kept calling me that. Then I could feel a breeze run by my legs,but... how Im wearing pants... I shouldn't have looked down, but I did. Somehow I had turned into a women. Not only that, but by the clothes I was defenately the body of a female teacher. The kids kept calling "Shizuka-senshi". Somehow my wish came true, but not the way I expected it too and being the calm person I am I tried to play it out calmly...

"What the heck?! What happened to me?!" I quicly got up and almost fell back down. Some kids came to me and held me by the arms and walked me to the rest of the group.

"Don't worry Shizuka-senshi! We know you've been busy. We'll help our favorite teacher anytime!" said one of the kids. I just didn't know what to say to the kids. They were all so happy and this Shizuka-senshi... Could I have somehow transformed into her, there teacher? What am I supposed to-do now?!
"Let me confirm, your shelter shield is activated?"
"What are you planning?!"
"Your shelter is secure, is it?"
"Of course it is! Just see for yourself how powerless you are!"
"...Roger that."
User avatar
Zoey
MSF Addict
MSF Addict
 
Posts: 10103
Joined: Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:42 pm
Location: In a tree top somewhere

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Garath the Shadowshifter » Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:07 am

(OOC: Erin informed me that I quoted wrong in the post where I TF Luke with his wish. Unless the board messed up. It should be fixed now.

As for anything else, I'll get to it tomorrow. Sleep now. >_<)
This Party's Getting CRAZY! LET'S ROCK!!
Image
User avatar
Garath the Shadowshifter
Active MSFer
Active MSFer
 
Posts: 897
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2004 6:27 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Kumi-chan » Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:41 am

Kevin grabs his brother hand dragging him along. "Come on brother! I want to ride some rides."

Ken sighs. "But I wanted to go play some games at the arcade." Ken frowns knowing that there is no way he can win this battle but to be honest he wanted to see the cute girls again. He is dragged around from ride to ride mostly letting Kevin ride on his own on the kiddy ride.

After a while Kevin turns towards Ken. "Brother I am hungry. Can we get some lunch now?" He bugs Ken about lunch for a bit Ken Laughes amuse.

"Sure bro lets go find some food" Ken looks for some place to eat. leading his little brother along. They walk around until Kevin bumps into Rhia. Ken apologizes for his brother and help him up. "Sorry about that." He pauses for a moment looking at Rhia "Hey you look familiar do I know you?"
User avatar
Kumi-chan
Spaminator
Spaminator
 
Posts: 5623
Joined: Wed Jul 07, 2004 11:21 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Kris_Roth » Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:20 pm

OOC: I would like to bring in Kristine Rothman (my tged character from garath's potion madness...just trying to figure out what age to play her as, and what she was doing during the year she had to adjust during college since the "incident".
User avatar
Kris_Roth
Crazy MSFer
Crazy MSFer
 
Posts: 3294
Joined: Tue Sep 13, 2005 5:56 pm
Location: Newark, OH

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby AshK » Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:43 pm

"I'm really sorry this happened, but I can't for the life of me figure out what caused it!" She said while absent mindly taking a bite of the cookie.

"I wish something would fix this..."
Last edited by AshK on Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
User avatar
AshK
Postimus Maximus
Postimus Maximus
 
Posts: 15504
Joined: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:10 pm
Location: Peoria, IL

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby Garath the Shadowshifter » Mon Jan 28, 2008 4:57 pm

(OOC: Actually I think it'd be better played if this is what had been typed:

Aaron sighed as she picked up the Peanut Butter cookie the young ghost girl had been trying to eat.

"I've really sorry this happened, but I can't for the life of me figure out what caused it!" She said while absent mindly taking a bite of the cookie.

"I wish something would fix this...")

(OOC: The problem is you are playing this like it's a game. That doesn't work for RPing. You have to THINK like the character you are playing. But you also have to do it realistically.

It's pretty UN-realistic for someone to just pick up a cookie and say: "What a bad day this has been. I wish I was a girl instead of a guy, but all my friends and family would remember me as a girl, yet I'd keep all my old memories."

See that's thinking in RPG terms. You want your character to TG, so you are thinking in terms of yourself playing as a 'game piece' and how to get that game piece to TG.

You're thinking (Now before I get much farther, this is what I'm seeing. I could be wrong) in a way of "Well to get my game piece to TG I'll just have him say he wants to be a girl and it'll happen"

You need to play this by a different angle. The cookies that grant wishes are a 'Tool' How can you use this tool to achive your goal? Well you want him to TG. Find a reasonable way for this person to 'accedently' wish it.

Example: "I spent so much time with (His girlfriend's name) that it's hard to believe she's gone. It'll probably be a long time before I ever find someone else... *sighs* Bet if I was a girl I'd have a boyfriend in no time. Wish I knew what THAT was like..."

Now that's a bit weird to hear someone say out loud, but it's believable. What you had him say, ESPECALLY the first time you posted him making a wish, was NOT believable.

I'm not going to 'omit' your last post. I'm simply going to ask you to edit it.

If you'd like, you can either copy, or have him say my example up there. (with him wishing something would fix this) and I'll get started on the 'wish'

I hope you don't think I'm being mean or unfair in all of this. I know I'm being a brat with this... ^^;

But I'm truly trying to help you out.)
This Party's Getting CRAZY! LET'S ROCK!!
Image
User avatar
Garath the Shadowshifter
Active MSFer
Active MSFer
 
Posts: 897
Joined: Thu Mar 04, 2004 6:27 pm

Re: "When you wish upon a star" (Another Potion Madness RPG)

Postby AshK » Mon Jan 28, 2008 5:38 pm

OOC: Edited, Thanks for helping me out Garath!
Last edited by AshK on Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
User avatar
AshK
Postimus Maximus
Postimus Maximus
 
Posts: 15504
Joined: Mon Apr 23, 2007 6:10 pm
Location: Peoria, IL

PreviousNext

Return to Roleplaying

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 10 guests