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[Evra]

ok i really wanna do a rp but im not that creative ( got the name from movie yes >.> ) lol

ok this is a rp about a person ( whoever plays the person can chose what gender ) who uses a mist to trap victims as the person will be in the mist usually targeting everyone one by one while there seperate but only takes a few and not everyone to there castle on an uncharted island while there knocked out were the person takes captives usually male and tgs them into females and makes them servants ( i doubt this one will get ANYONE in to join but any suggestions or help cause i really wanna start a roleplay )



i got a different roleplay in the works about beach resort but i cant find out how to fit tg and bunny girls in it and i probbaly seem like im taking the bunnys from angies awseome rp but i ishnt lol help through pm for this one would be appreciated ))

[Brnin8r]

Well here's some advice. I'm looking at what you wrote and it sounds more or less like you have an idea for a roleplay but really want someone else to do it. If you want to start your own roleplay, you're going to have to already have something of a story and usually you'll have to play the antagonist or other people. It sounds like you would rather be the victim of this mist, but to be so, someone else will have to take on the mantle of responsibility. So here's what you do: if you want someone else to be the villain, you'll need to have a defined story and plot so that someone can get interested in it.

[Evra]

thanks for the advice but id have to have someone whos partally intrested in it then id discuss it more to that person :-/

[muffinstud]

Another thought: You seem to have the basis of an RP that could work and work well. But that's just it: it's only a basis still. Some successful rp's don't even have stories (the Shoujoland series), but with varied decision branches and detailed avenues for a person to choose, it doesn't need a story. The player characters become the story.

Granted, this requires all the effort N8 already described, and more. You have to focus on creating something enticing. You have to take your idea and package it in a way that will lure the unsuspecting rper into your little "choose your own adventure".

Just thought I might throw that out as an alternative to the more traditional storyline rp.

[Evra]

well the antagonist has a large castle on the uncharted island and usually takes lonely or perverted boys from the mainland in "the mist" turning them into /// BUNNY SLAVE GIRLS lmao xD i guess that some minor mind chages could happen but usually there suppose to live like that so long that it kinda becomes a part of them lol and usually the mind things will be as punishment for trying to run or something like that and possibly i could make that beach resort on the island making it a charted island but if the slaves wish to ever have a chance at becoming normal again they wont say anything to the guests lol

[Nikki]

Another thing is that if you wanna have your rp you have to learn how to rp out of first person. It sets up info about the character

And Angie already has a bunny girl rp. It helps to do something no one's done.

[Evra]

wolf girl slaves? lol and i can rp outta first person itll just take m a lil while to get out of the habit

[Nikki]

You also have to use proper grammar and capitalization. And maybe any sort of animal girl. Not just one type

[Evra]

neko and wolf girl slaves and grr lol i aint perfect at that xD cept spelling lol )

[AshK]

It sounds like you have a pretty good idea at what you want to do, but everything that everyone else said rings true. I have been on this Forum for almost a year and a half and I still have problems RP'ing right at some points. Though I have gotten a lot better, I still have a lot of work to do. Even more work to do then the ones that joined after me. It is very important that you get out of first person RP'ing. Good luck, and I hope that when you do start, you will have great success.

[Evra]

*thinks for a moment* alright i can rp in third so ill remake the rp

wait before i make the mist roleplay may i have someone who wil voulanteer to be the evil antagonist ?

[Tala]

I am all for the antangonist. I love playing evil chars and I am good at detailed tfs.

[Evra]

really awseome thank juu if u wanna discuss your chars appearance in stuff in here or pm ust say cause i aint gonna make u look like i want you to

[Nikki]

You still need work on spelling and capitalization.

[Evra]

u shush i spell fine lol