Lio's Caption Topic

[Lioconvoy]

I will, I just have some other ideas to work on. I would have done an RPG on cept I think it might be too much like Frost's MSF Spillover. Then again I'm not entirely sure what that's about.

[Lioconvoy]

Nother one to compare, and anouncing I just added six new captions at MA: Words of Blood

Original: http://magicalsailorfuku.net/images/new ... diary2.jpg

MA: http://www.midnightaurora.com/index.php ... 1&viewkey=

[Lioconvoy]

Four more....cuase I am kinda fishing for comments good or bad, indivual links to each:

Encounter With Blood
First glimpse of what I created Blood for. He strips the Supernatural of there power.

Void 5
Yep another void one.

Gift
I hope Musashi aproves of this one, but If not I will edit it.

Painting
Tomoyo, gave me the name for the country in this one.

[Musashi]

Yus! I do indeed approve. :D I like that one, and the first one~ *Hug-a-Lio!*

[Lioconvoy]

Five More, I have a bit of time on my hands. Sorry no FtM today.

Shift

Finally
This one is actaully the sequal to my previuos Man of Science caption.

Homebrewed

Runesfromthepast
Both the Title and name mentioned are in reference to one of my favorite Anime.

Hunting

[Lioconvoy]

Five new captions at MA.

Cured

<_< >_> Although not a cameo, the Sarah mentioned is based after someone I know

DreamHigh

Saw this pic wanted to caption it but didn't know what that board in the back was for till reading Itchiro 100%

Stereoype

This was actauly the last one I made of this set. When I saw the pic I had to caption it.

Invasion

I've been wanting to caption this pic for a bit, but didn't know how to till I captioned the next one.

HareDye

My Evil Bunny Empire makes electronics when thinking of how to make this caption I decided to have them make beuaty products

[opus`]

*claps*

I like the EBE ^_^

[Lioconvoy]

Resurecting this from the dead, but I figured why make a new topic when this one will do. I finally got a photbucket, and I've put all my captions from Midnight Aurora on it. They can be found here: http://s660.photobucket.com/albums/uu32 ... 0Captions/

[Funny Hat + Funny Accent]

Nice! Glad to see that you're coming back some.

[Lioconvoy]

I don't know if they're any good but I finally made a few more captions.

[Lioconvoy]

Two new ones;




Nikkou helped with the grammar, but I disagreed with some of her suggestions, so all faults with the captions remain with me.

[Queen Octavia]

I like the last one the most, I suppose the grammar feels a bit wonky with all the hads making the tense intense, but that's neither hear nor their.

[Lioconvoy]

XD Nikou and I "had" argurments over the "hads". You're not the first to tell me to limit the use of "had" and I generally do; however in the case of the later caption, I thought they fit. Maybe the other things that I "had" ignored of Nikkou's suggestions changed how they fit.

Nikkou's Suggestion(notes removed)

Craig couldn't believe it: they had gotten Joseph, too. The three of them — which included his other friend, Anthony — decided to meet on the roof of the school to discuss what had happened to them, now that he, alone, had yet to be transformed by the student council.

It had been announced, that very morning, how the student body president didn't believe that there were enough cute girls in the school; and how he, along with the student council, would do something about it. Craig had no idea how they would be able to, but, somehow, both of his best friends were now girls.

[Mitera Nikkou]

Hey, past tense is past tense. Things that have already happened need to be addressed by using the proper words. ;p You don't use present tense when Joseph had been transformed prior to his appearance to Craig, nor when the announcement was made that morning.

Just makes sense, to me. It's not like it couldn't be rephrased so everything could be referred to in the present tense, like I eluded to when we had our disagreement ("one way or the other, past or present"), but you're stubborn and I had to work with that. Even in the end result, the first caption, after the opening dialogue, is set up for past tense ("ever since"), but you use present tense ("was") instead.

Maybe it's just a matter of style. *Shrugs* I'm no English major. I just play a nekkid person on TV! :O

[Lioconvoy]

Well the reason, even if I didn't remember it at the time, I was arguing against the "hads", was what Lurker said. It makes the tense intense.