by Coruscate » Wed Oct 20, 2004 11:11 pm
Vierge: Actually it wasn't the legs that killed you, it was a lack of a clear visual of the the pelvic area in your mind, which caused what you see in the legs. The bubble under her left upper left is the butt line, but it's far removed from where her butt should be, and the crotch is turned too much towards the reader, it should be more sideways. And the other leg is definitely detached from the body.
Other than that, good.
And unless you're specifying a certain version of a character (say FF7 Cloud versus Advent Children Cloud) leave that kind of detail to the artist, the idea is to leave the artist as free to design as possible. But I don't know if they did an adult Sakura, so if they did, then just ignore everything I said ;-p
Death: Not bad, not bad. If you're putting her hands behind her back to avoid drawing hands, don't do that or you'll never learn how though ^^;;
May or may not do the Gundam seed thing, I still have two uncleared 30 minute sketches to go. Julian and Sia.
"god knows I don't go through life trying to be normal. Peculiar suits me just fine."
-Xia
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